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Onuzim Ima

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As I'm planning to do subsequent (mini?)episodes with :ami: and my own hero in which they 'borrow' each other now and then and have some more shared adventures and I'm trying to still improve and refine my style where necessary, I'd like to know if any of you folks would enjoy such a scene (possible spoilers):

[...]:ami: hesitatingly read out the translations her computer had provided her with. "Well, the *insert species name later* Ambassador basically says that he is quite displeased - to say the least - with the fact that he and his staff have to wait so long until they're let forward to you..." She swallowed hard and her voice became a bit shaky. "And further he suggests that you, er, 'make Love'... with your 'Maternal Breeder'..." - "Woah!", Robbie gasped, instantly getting pretty much of an idea what THAT probably meant. "Go tell him that a)I'm not THAT desperate as I have a beautiful, hot wife and thus a sufficient, fulfilling sex-life and that b)his lips, or snout or beak or whatever he may have attached to his face - if you can actually call it one - may have close contact with HIS Maternal Breeder's rectal orifice.", he muttered while turning away. :ami: showed a surprisingly dirty smile when she replied: "With pleasure, your Majesty..." Only moments later, at first one could hear an outraged-sounding, angry growl which quickly morphed into an even louder, heartly laughter. Cue 'Star Wars cut' to a costly banquet with Rob and the Ambassador sitting next to each other with the latter holding a jar of beer in one of his three-fingered, clawed hands while using the other one to pat on the former's back in a friendly, fraternizing way but strong enough that he almost threw up his own innards...
What do you think, would you actually laugh? :)
 
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I am working on a story and have come across a bump in the road. It regards one of my OC I'm thinking of adding into the story. The thing is... the character is the spy/assassin of Silver Millennium. However as I started planning the introduction of the character in the story I started thinking... Would a kingdom so utopian as Silver Millennium have a need for such people? And is Queen Serenity the type of ruler who would employ them? From my own memory of them I would say no, but before throwing away the idea comepletely I thought I'd get a second opinion. So what do you here think?
 

Sabrblade

Luna Crescens
Sep 13, 2009
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lord Martiya

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Little crossover idea: as noted here, Minako is trained in Savate, and the manga shows she's strong enough to one-shot Makoto without transforming... So what if her master is Christopher Eclair? After all, it takes a special kind of man (that is, a madman) to keep up with her...
 
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I am working on a story and have come across a bump in the road. It regards one of my OC I'm thinking of adding into the story. The thing is... the character is the spy/assassin of Silver Millennium. However as I started planning the introduction of the character in the story I started thinking... Would a kingdom so utopian as Silver Millennium have a need for such people? And is Queen Serenity the type of ruler who would employ them? From my own memory of them I would say no, but before throwing away the idea comepletely I thought I'd get a second opinion. So what do you here think?
I didn't see this, but, yes, even a near-paradise will have the need for spies and assassins, if only for preventive maintenance, as well as give those who are not satisfied with utopia something to do. See Section 31 from the Star Trek franchise.
 

FloraKiraraHime

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I am honestly not a fan of the character bashing with Usagi she would not resort to murder or act as evil as you have and she certainly is not only in love with Mamoru for his money. Honestly you went very ooc with her.

Also Crystal Tokyo is not up to Ami. It is Usagi and Mamoru who found Crystal Tokyo. If Ami didn't want to be a part of it then she wouldn't have to but she is not the catalyst to found it.
I'm not a fan of this Usagi bashing! You're right! Usagi murdering people is very OOC. Usagi is someone believes there's good in everybody.
 
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Well, I just finished... something.



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"Well, I could lie and tell you that's what I am, when I'm actually a brilliant artist, or even a scholar. I could tell you that I dream of world peace, when I'm actually waiting for its destruction. The truth is what you see with your eyes, not what you hear."
 
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FloraKiraraHime

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Here's the premise of my AU fanfic, it's practiically a canon divergence fic than spans more than 5 chapters! I was predominantly inspired by Mermaid Melody, one of my favorite magical girl animated programs! I'll be using both the DiC/Cloverway dub (well, most of them) as well as the original Japanese/Viz dub names.

Serena, a mermaid from the Lunarian kingdom residing in the North Pacific Ocean finds others in her quest to fight the forces of evil who want to take control of the sea world. These baddies are from the past, her past but her future as well! In order to find her companions, she must adopt a human form under the guise of schoolgirl Tsukino Usagi, she enrolls as a second year at Azabu-Juban Junior High School. It's there that she meets Mizuno Ami, the genius girl in her class.

What do you think?
 
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