Sailor Moon Meets Buzz Lightyear fanfic (series)

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johnnygkun

Lapis Lunaris
Feb 25, 2016
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#1
http://fromequestria2la.deviantart.com/ ... -475688675

True story: Back when I was getting in to Sailor Moon (and the anime fandom in general) in the summer of 2000, I actually envisioned a Sailor Moon/Buzz Lightyear crossover fic. Now, almost 14 years later, here is a coherent version (or at least fairly close to being coherent) of this fanfiction.

It is 12 chapters long, I made a few changes, namely, instead of being set in Tokyo, Los Angeles is the main setting (because I always thought that if Sailor Moon were to be set in the U.S.A, Los Angeles would be the perfect setting, so sorry if you don't like this change), and for reasons lost to time (no pun intended here), I decided to put the DeLorean from Back to the Future in there. ROFL at silly 13 year old me. Anyway, enjoy! Feel free to comment; but any snide remarks will not be tolerated, however. The story is set in the S arc of Sailor Moon, as an aside.

While I think this is miles better than what I plotted out 16 years ago, I still think the battle scene needs more fine-tuning, and this is intended to be the second part of what is going to be a four-part series (the first fic is set in the R arc, and #3 and #4 are in the SuperS and Stars arcs, respectively). Trouble is, I have been unable to come up with a good, coherent story for each one. Maybe I could use some help with that here, I guess...... if anybody has any good ideas. Constructive criticism and suggestions are also welcome. Bear in mind, I don't often write fanfics, so because this is a rare foray for me into this field, I apologize if the story seems rather rough at times.

This fic is rated PG-13 for some language and a graphically violent scene- viewer discretion is advised.

PRODUCTION NOTES (warning, here be spoilers):
Spoiler: show
- A working subtitle for this fic was "Those Who Toy With Pure Hearts".
- Robotica, the Daimon set out to capture Buzz's pure heart crystal, went through five different redesigns before settling on the ED-209-like design he has. On that note....
- Robotica, due to his ED-209-like design, moved extraordinarily slowly, which is why Kaorinite cut off part of Buzz's left arm; she had grown impatient of Buzz calling for help, and due to Robotica's slow speed, decided to take matters into her own hands.
- If this story is canon, this is the first time the Marine Cathedral, where Buzz encounters Sailors Uranus and Neptune, appears in the story.
- The DeLorean is to the same exact specifications as it appeared in Back to the Future Part II: It can fly, and it has Mr. Fusion attached on the back (as opposed to the plutonium chamber in the first BttF film.)
- I intend to, someday, write a metafic from Sailor Neptune's POV realizing her and Sailor Uranus' mistake in mistrusting Buzz Lightyear, with this thought in mind: "How could I have been so wrong? Have I become so fanatical about destroying the Death Busters that I see them even where they don't exist? Way to go, Haruka, you may have just helped the enemy by harming a good guy."
 

johnnygkun

Lapis Lunaris
Feb 25, 2016
67
2
0
31
Washington state
#2
One plan of mine is to rewrite the story slightly, and also write it in a 'movie script' format.
 

johnnygkun

Lapis Lunaris
Feb 25, 2016
67
2
0
31
Washington state
#3
I know it's in bad form to post a thread that's almost two years old, but has anybody taken to reading my fanfic above? And maybe give ideas for the prequel fic, and #3 and #4? (As I stated, this is intended to be a four-part series.)