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 Post subject: Re: Fanfiction Ideas
PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2015 7:12 pm 
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I was expecting an idea, not full-length novel.

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 Post subject: Re: Fanfiction Ideas
PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2015 4:12 am 
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Again excellent work Sabrblade I am quite pleased with everything I have read it is amazingly detailed and definitely a great story. I sincerely hope you write it one day as I will definitely read it and give you my review. It is truly an amazing fanseason. One question though are the Shadow Senshi Sailor Senshi as well just evil one's serving Chaos. Also you might be interested to know that in my fanfiction my Sailor Sun or Hina Kusaka's Sailor Guardians are based on the 4 symbols, the Yellow Dragon and the 3 enclosures as they were constellations in China. When the Sailor Senshi maker is finally updated I will definitely post them.

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Episode 43 would have Sailor Jupiter and Sailor Neptune (the two feminine ones) searching the Io Castle for Jupiter’s Legendary Weapon, the Seiryuu Sword (a dragon-themed sword that can generate electricity from its blade) and their fight against the tactical-minded Shadow Pulsar. In this fight, Sailor Jupiter would gain a new attack (yet to be named) with the Seiryuu Sword, and Sailor Neptune would use “Submarine Violon Tide” with her Deep Aqua Mirror.

And once the two Sailor Senshi would have what they came for, they’d teleport out since Shadow Pulsar would be too powerful to beat. Pulsar, like the other three Shadow Senshi, would sense the presence of something and, before warping away, would say, “She’s here… Shadow Moon…!”

Back on Earth, Usagi and Mamoru would be at Usagi’s house having a talk with Ikuko and Kenji about their daughter having secretly been Sailor Moon all along, fighting enemies and putting herself in danger behind their backs. Shingo would be there too, trying to help his parents accept Usagi as a superhero (yeah, Shingo would be supporting his sister by this point), but the two parents would be uncertain if they could trust Usagi anymore after having learned that their daughter has been lying to them all this time, leaving a secret life of deception and rushing into danger without thinking of how her loved ones would feel if anything were to happen to her. Even Luna would try to help, but the revelation of the cat being able to speak would likewise be too much to bear, as that would be yet another lie on top of all the others. Usagi’s parents would at first attempt to forbid Usagi from being Sailor Moon anymore, but when they’d see how much objection they’d receive from their decision, they would then decide that, the longer Usagi continues being Sailor Moon, the harder she will have to work to win back her parents’ trust.

Once the other Senshi and Artemis would get back to Earth, they’d find that Setsuna had also returned, ahead of them, with some troubling news. She found out nothing in her investigations, gathering only that the warning must originate from a point in time far beyond her reach, a future era she cannot access. However, she would also mention that there was something, or someone, else inside the space-time corridor with her, and whatever it was attempted to fight her off and keep her from proceeding any further. She even had to use her “Garnet Ball” technique to defend herself (which would be shown in a flashback). Once the fight was over, Pluto found herself back in the 20th century. She and the other Senshi would wonder if someone came through the space-time corridor from the future.


Episode 44 would be Part 1 of a two-parter. Typhos would be healed from the wounds inflicted upon him by Chaos and, after doing some thinking during his recovery, he would decide that, if he is to survive and surpass anyone and everyone who might oppose him, the power of Chaos would need to become his and his alone. But, he would keep these thoughts to himself. Erebus and Nyx would be discussing the seeming failure of the ones who called themselves the Shadow Senshi, but before she and Erebus could continue discussing the matter any further, Tartarus would return with the knowledge he’d gleaned from Sailor Moon (along with her words of “Living only to await one’s death is a sad way to live” still on his mind). Knowing now that she’s Princess Serenity--the “Daughter of Selene” (Selene no Musume), as he’d call her—and knowing the kind of power her Silver Crystal possesses, Tartarus would insist that the Imperium reorganize its plans around dealing with the threat Sailor Moon poses. Erebus would agree, but then an argument would break out between the two about whether she should be either killed or kept alive for Chaos to kill. Typhos would then jump in and argue that she should be kept alive so that he can have her, which would then escalate the argument to involve the subject of Typhos’s obsession with Sailor Moon and how it’s interfered with the Imperium’s plans in the past.

The argument would finally be stopped by Nyx playing the role of a mediator to get everyone back on the same page. She would point out that this conflict between themselves is exactly why they have never been able to defeat the Sailor Senshi, since Tartarus wants to keep the Senshi alive for Chaos to kill while Erebus wants them killed without delay, and Typhos places his lust for Sailor Moon above the mission to revive Chaos, putting his personal desires at odds with the Imperium’s true purpose. None of them can ever hope to achieve anything when they all keep fighting amongst themselves and refuse to fully work together with each other. Therefore, Nyx would propose that they try a different strategy, one they can all agree on.

Reviewing their past activities from previous episodes, going over what worked and what didn’t, Nyx would decide that they should attempt to do to Sailor Moon what they had done to Sailor Mercury: Corrupt her to their side. But this time, in such a way as to not be so unpredictable and instead be more receptive to their commands. That way, Sailor Moon would no longer be a threat to the Imperium’s plans, would still be alive for Chaos to deal with later, and would allow her to be with Typhos as an ally. Seeing little flaws in Nyx’s proposal, the other three would agree to it. However, Tartarus would request to be in charge of overseeing this plan, as he’d feel he’d know just how to carry it out. Erebus would question if Tartarus would be trying to take back his position of leadership from him, to which Tartarus would answer that he would only resume command if Erebus were to truly relinquish the title. Reassured but still skeptical, Erebus would permit him to proceed.

The first step in this plan would be to see if Sailor Moon really could be corrupted as Mercury was, for one of the key factors in how Dark Mercury both performed and was defeated lay in her memories as a Sailor Senshi. Because of the influence Mercury’s memories had, Tartarus would have Nyx create a spell to try and erase all of Sailor Moon’s memories, as a test to see how thoroughly she could be turned. This test would be classified as “Phase One: Memory Loss”. Naturally, Typhos would volunteer to be the one to test the spell on their selected victim.

Back on Earth, Usagi would be at school with Ami, Minako, Makoto, Naru, and Luna, talking about Usagi’s previous encounter with Tartarus and what information she and him gleaned from each other. They would discuss how Tartarus, though definitely their enemy, seems to be unlike all other enemies they’ve ever encountered. To her, it’s as though Tartarus is genuinely noble in his intentions and demeanor, but fighting on the wrong side. Minako and Makoto would be in disbelief of this, but Ami would vouch for Usagi since, though most of her specific memories of when she was Dark Mercury would be hazy, she’d be able to vaguely recall that Tartarus did treat her well, only becoming scary when she, as Dark Mercury, continued to act out of line. Unfortunately, though, Ami’s memories of where the Imperium’s headquarters is located would be long gone, being the result of a failsafe side effect from having the spell that turned her evil cleansed from her. The discussion would then change to the current state of Usagi’s home, with her parents still giving her the cold shoulder, unable to forgive their daughter for her continued lying to them about being Sailor Moon. The others would tell Usagi to hang in there and not give up hope that her parents might come around and accept her for the hero of love and justice that she is.

Shortly thereafter, however, the girls would literally bump into Ryuu, who would help Usagi back to her feet after having accidently knocked her down. Upon helping her up, Ryuu would put Usagi under the spell as she’d look him in the eye when he’d help her up. Feeling a little wary of Ryuu, Makoto would urge Usagi and the others to be on their way and, not wanting to draw suspicion to himself, Ryuu would let them walk off, silently waiting to let the spell take effect. However, since the spell would only serve as a test, rather than having her lose them all at once, she’d lose her memories only gradually. First, she would forget who Minako is, then Makoto, then Ami, then that she’s Sailor Moon, and then Luna, until finally she’d only remember being friends with Naru. By this point, she’d also forget about the Outers, Rei, and that Mamoru’s her boyfriend (remembering him only as the jerk who annoyed her before). She’d basically be reverted to how she was at the very start of the first season.

The others would try their best to get her to remember them all, and both Rei and Mamoru would soon meet up with them to help as well. However, Usagi would be completely in the dark about who any of them are, except for Naru and “that jerk”. Shortly, Typhos would decide to make his appearance to personally retrieve Usagi and take her for himself, refusing to let any of them jog her memory so easily. But the other Senshi would keep him at bay while Naru would take off with Usagi, pulling her along to try to keep her safe like how Usagi had done for Naru earlier this season.

Meanwhile, up on the Moon inside the Moon Castle, a dark figure in armor (black with medium pink) would be standing within the castle’s main hall, taking in the majesty of a great crystalline spire set in front of her. This person, Shadow Moon, would then be joined by the arrival of four other beings of her kind, the other Shadow Senshi. The four would get Shadow Moon up to speed on things, like their present alliance with the Primordial Imperium, and explain that they have yet to obtain the Sailor Crystals of the Sailor Senshi, but will not rest until they have them. They would then ask Shadow Moon about her own delayed arrival, to which she would reply “I took care of our pursuer, but there was another pest in my way that kept me from reaching here. She put up a fight, but I forced her back to get here myself.” When the other four would ask her what they are to do now, Shadow Moon would tell them to continue their ruse of being seen as allies to the Primordial Imperium for the time being. For now, Shadow Moon will go after Sailor Moon while the other four provide assistance to the Imperium’s current plans.

As Naru would pull Usagi alongside trying to get her to safety away from Typhos (who’d still be fighting the Guardian Senshi), and all the while hoping Usagi’s memory of Naru wouldn’t fade just yet, the two would be ambushed by the sudden arrival of the sadistic Shadow Moon, who’d corner the two in an alley. Naru would try to defend Usagi, but Shadow Moon would swat her aside, knocking her out. As all hope for Usagi would seem to be lost, from out of the sky would come a red rose, striking the ground before Shadow Moon. From high above, a figure in black would swoop down to defend the amnesiac Usagi. Mamoru would be donning his Tuxedo Mask form for the first time since obtaining his Golden Knight upgrade, knowing and hoping that Usagi would see him in this form and either trigger a memory of it or be smitten by him once again. He would confront and engage Shadow Moon, even using his “Tuxedo La Smoking Bomber” attack for the first time in this 90’s anime continuity.

Back with Typhos vs. the Sailor Senshi, the four other Shadow Senshi would descend upon the fight (much to the horrors of each Guardian Sailor Senshi seeing them here on Earth) with the pretense of having come to help Typhos fight the Sailor Senshi. They’d secretly hope this claim would get Typhos out of the way of their mission, but Typhos would instead feel offended, thinking that they were sent by the Protogenoi to help him, when he’d want to prove that he could handle this by himself. So rather than let the other four take care of the Sailor Senshi for him, with his pride clouding his better judgment, he’d insist that he’ll personally deal with the Sailor Senshi in spite of their offer to assist him. The Shadow Senshi would silently consider Typhos a fool who would get in the way of their own plans, but would not stop him from having his way so as to keep up their ruse of being his ally. Even still, they’d also fight the Sailor Senshi regardless, pretty much wiping the floor with each of them until the Outer Senshi would arrive to help.

Back with the fight against Shadow Moon, Tuxedo Mask would be doing his best to keep Usagi safe, but wouldn’t be as powerful in this form and would be struggling to hold his own. He’d go as long as he could to stay in his Tuxedo Mask form before switching to his Golden Knight form so as to let Usagi’s trust in him grow further, knowing that she’d take to Tuxedo Mask more than anything else. However, at one point, Shadow Moon would strike him down, exposing his unmasked face to Usagi, who would recognize him as “that jerk”, but would now be confused about whether she’d really dislike him or not after having just witnessed him risking his life for her. Mamoru would beg Usagi to trust that he’s always going to protect her no matter what, because his love for her is boundless. Usagi would be overwhelmed by so many emotions, uncertain of how to handle all this. Mamoru would embrace her and whisper into her ear “I love you, Usako,” and would turn to face Shadow Moon, who would grow tired of Shadow Moon’s toying with him, wanting to end this battle. With a renewed resolve and fire in his eyes, Mamoru would raise his Golden Crystal Pen and cry out “Golden Crystal Power, (something) Up!” ending Part 1.


Episode 45 would have Mamoru turning into the Golden Knight and engaging Shadow Moon one-on-one. Meanwhile, Typhos and the other four Shadow Senshi would still be fighting the other eight Sailor Senshi, with Sailor Jupiter sword-fighting with Typhos. During the fight, Sailor Pluto would realize that something about the Shadow Senshi seems familiar to her, recognizing their energy and basic appearance as being like that of the person she previously encountered and fought in the space-time corridor.

Back with Golden Knight and Shadow Moon, the two would continue fighting each other as Naru would regain consciousness and try to get back up. Usagi, meanwhile, would be watching the fight, completely overcome with emotion, seeing a real life knight in shining armor fighting to save her… because he loves HER! However, another flash of the memory spell would kick in, causing her to collapse from a searing pain in her head that would knock her out. Seeing her fall, Naru would cry out to her and make her way over to her. Realizing that Naru’s still here, the Golden Knight would call out to her to get Usagi to safety, to get her to Game Center Crown! While a little confused by this order (especially since Crown would be closed at this time), Naru would comply and help up the unconscious Usagi onto her shoulder and escort her to Crown while the Golden Knight would provide cover for them. Determined to not let her quarry get away, Shadow Moon would escalate the fight, only for the Golden Knight to counter with his own increased resolve. At last, he would finally finish the fight with an augmented version of his light-based attack with Ouryuken. Believing his foe to have either perished or retreated, the Golden Knight would sheath his sword and make haste towards Crown. However, unbeknownst to him, Shadow Moon would still be alive, having survived his attack and hidden from sight, intent on following him to let him lead her to Sailor Moon.

Back at the fight between the Sailor Senshi, Shadow Senshi, and Typhos, the Sailor Senshi would be on the ground, exhaust from the fight but still refusing to give up. Their weapons would lay beside each of them, though Jupiter’s sword would have landed on top of Venus’s kunai chain, their physical contact causing the two weapons to emit a glowing aura. Before either Jupiter or Venus could take stock in this, the fight would be interrupted by Tartarus arriving tell Typhos to cease this senseless fighting and pull out, for Typhos had failed to retrieve the now long gone Sailor Moon. However, the presence of the Shadow Senshi would puzzle Tartarus, as he’d never knew they were still alive nor aware of any order given to them to assist Typhos. This revelation would startle Typhos and the Sailor Senshi, who would all demand to know who the Shadow Senshi really are and why they’re really here. Seeing how outnumbered they are and that their cover has been blown, the four Shadow Senshi would gather together and cryptically respond with “You’ll know soon enough,” before warping away into the sky.

Wanting answers, the Sailor Senshi would demand from Tartarus to explain what’s going on, but Tartarus would simply answer with “I know nothing of those four Shadow Senshi. But as for Typhos and myself, it’s as our uninvited guests said: You’ll know soon enough,” vanishing away with Typhos to leave behind a rather frustrated Sailor Team. Venus, however, would get a message from Artemis via her communicator, telling her and the others to come to the Secret Base immediately. The girls would decide to head over there.

Back at the Sagittarius Zero Star, Nyx would be reviewing the battle that had just taken place between Typhos, the Sailor Senshi, and the Shadow Senshi, surprised to see the Shadow Senshi having appeared in that battle when they never returned to the Imperium nor were given any new orders from them. She’d ask Erebus what he thinks of them and if they can be trusted (since Nyx has doubted their sincerity from the beginning), but Erebus would be in a state of self-reflection, pondering over his performance as leader. He would confess to Nyx how he believes to have failed in his leadership, being no better (maybe even worse) a leader than Tartarus was. Nyx would reassure him that he hasn’t failed, that the Sailor Senshi are to blame for all of their shortcomings. While he doesn’t deny the Sailor Senshi having been a thorn in his side for so long, Erebus would state that he thought he could do better than his brother, but admits to Nyx that he feels like something’s missing in his leadership skills, something that Tartarus has that he himself lacks. Erebus would then ask Nyx why, after having come up with the idea of this plan herself, she let Tartarus take charge of overseeing it, instead of carrying it out herself. Nyx would answer that it’s because, for all of Tartarus’s own shortcomings, she believes in him, feeling confident and secure that he’ll come through in the end. When Erebus then asks Nyx what she thinks of him as her leader, Nyx would confess to him that she’s always believed in him as well, even in spite of the reckless decisions he’s made in the past (such as losing the Obsidian Core and trying to kill Sailor Mars behind the Imperium’s back), and was impressed when he took charge over Tartarus. She wants Erebus to put aside his feelings of doubt and believe in himself as much as she believes in him. He isn’t his brother and never will be, so he should stop comparing himself to Tartarus and be the leader than only he can be. While Erebus would be flattered, he would admit to her that he honestly does feel that Tartarus is more capable at being a leader than he is, and would remember what Tartarus said before about only resuming command if Erebus let him, reflecting on how Tartarus is one who earns his promotions through merit rather than demanding them like Erebus did. Nyx would ask Erebus if he’s saying that he wants to give the title of leader back to Tartarus, and Erebus would respond that he’s too prideful to ever admit that to Tartarus, especially after all Erebus did to get where he is right now. So Nyx would ask Erebus what he’s going to do now, and Erebus would be left with a decision he would have to make.

At Crown, Naru would still be with the unconscious Usagi when Mamoru and the cats would finally arrive. Mamoru would carry Usagi into the Secret Base and lay her down. Theorizing that, since the Silver Crystal had once restored memories that both Usagi and Mamoru once lost before, and since the Golden Crystal previously had done the same for Mamoru, perhaps using the two in conjunction with each other might be able to heal Usagi’s current state. Pulling out his Golden Crystal, Mamoru would place it over Usagi’s brooch. The Golden Crystal would glow, bringing out the Silver Moon Crystal. The two crystals would glow brighter and brighter, until the whole room would be filled with a bright white light that would swallow Usagi, Mamoru, and the cats. The other Sailor Senshi would all arrive just in time to be consumed by the light as well. The whole group would have a vision together, with Usagi awakening in the vision to seemingly have her memories back, though not without a major headache. Mamoru would embrace her, relieved that she’s returned to normal, but something else would cut short their celebration. Standing before them all in this bright white void would be gentle, motherly-looking woman clad in green clothing.

Mamoru would feel like he’d met this woman before, and the woman would confirm his suspicions, for she was the presence he felt upon his first acquiring the Golden Crystal from Helios. She would introduce herself as Gaia, Soul of the Earth, a Protogenos. The Senshi would prepare themselves if she was an enemy, but Gaia would put them at ease, declaring herself to be on the side of life, having no shared interests with the Primordial Imperium. After being asked who she is, Gaia would explain to the Senshi the backstory of herself and the Primordial Imperium as described in my older posts (I originally had Tartarus explain this origin and much closer to the end of the series, but felt it would be better for it to come earlier, and in such a way as to give Gaia a presence in the story). When asked how to defeat Chaos and the Imperium, Gaia would also be asked if she possessed the power needed to defeat them. Gaia, however, would state that she alone does not have that kind of power, declaring that only through unity can Chaos be defeated. Only when all are brought together can their light defeat the darkness. Gaia’s particular phrasing of this statement would have some of the Senshi wondering what Gaia means by “their light”, as though Gaia was speaking of others like herself. But before they could ask Gaia what she meant, the vision would begin to fade as Gaia would be short of any further time (much like the Queen Serenity scene from Act 10 of the manga). However, before the vision would end, the Senshi would ask Gaia two final things, what she knew about the ones called the Shadow Senshi (as even Tartarus seemed unfamiliar with them), and what the premonition given by the Sailor crystals means. Gaia, however, would also have never heard of these “Shadow Senshi”, supposing that, whoever they are, it’s very possible that they’re an external faction unrelated to the Primordial Imperium. As for the premonition, Gaia would have no knowledge of that either. The vision would then end.

Back inside the secret base, everyone would be at a loss of what to do now. However, they’d hear a scream coming from outside at the entrance to Crown. Emerging from the arcade, they’d find Naru (who hadn’t been pulled into the vision, and instead had tried to get out of the base to get away from the blinding light) being held hostage by the surviving Shadow Moon, who had secretly followed Mamoru back to Crown. Usagi would transform into Sailor Moon and demand that Naru be released. Shadow Moon would allow Naru to live only if the Senshi were to give her what she’d want, their Sailor Crystals. Naru would beg the Senshi to not give in, but Sailor Moon would beg Shadow Moon to stop choking Naru. Shadow Moon would demand the Sailor Crystals once again, with all of the Sailor Senshi and the Golden Knight uncertain of what to do. Usagi would want to save Naru, but the Sailor Crystals would likewise be too precious to give up.

Before Sailor Moon could make a decision, however, a black ray of energy would strike Shadow Moon from behind, releasing her grip on Naru. Hovering above, Tartarus would declare to Shadow Moon that she and her ilk have interfered with a very delicate plan, and that he will not allow her to possess the Sailor Crystals. Shadow Moon would yell at him, calling him a fool for what he’s done, himself having interfered with a plan much bigger than he could fathom. Tartarus would demand that she explain herself, but Shadow Moon (outnumbered and too injured to continue fighting) would curse him and everyone around her before warping away. Tartarus would then lower himself to the ground and address the Sailor Senshi. Before Sailor Moon could ask why he helped them, Tartarus would stop her, explaining that he only did what he did because Shadow Moon had no honor in her tactics, and that the Shadow Senshi had lied to the Imperium about where their loyalties lay. He was not going to stand by and allow Shadow Moon to go unpunished for her comrades’ deception. He’d remind Sailor Moon that, though he does respect her, she will continue to be his enemy for as long as she and her friends continue to oppose his master (though her words to him from before would again still be on his mind). Sailor Moon would attempt to tell him something else (about Gaia), but the Golden Knight would stop her, insisting that Tartarus doesn’t need to be told about that. Tartarus would then depart with a “Till we meet again.”

Back at Sagittarius Zero Star, Tartarus would regroup with the others, declaring that the Shadow Senshi are working from their own agenda and are no longer allies of the Imperium, having never been. It is decided that, if they continue to interfere, the Shadow Senshi must be dealt with, if the Sailor Senshi don’t take care of them first. Erebus would hesitate in his possibly wanting to give Tartarus back the leader role, and would instead cover it up by expressing dissatisfaction with Tartarus’s plan so far. But Tartarus would reassure him that the memory drain test did prove that the Daughter of Selene can indeed have her mind wiped clean, as such will be necessary for the rest of this plan. When asked what he plans to do next, Tartarus would declare the commencement of “Phase Two: False Calm.”


Episode 46 would be Part 1 of another two-parter (last one, I promise). The name of this episode would be “Holiday plans! The Shadow Senshi ‘s Sinister Plot”.

By this point, the Winter break would be in effect and Christmas would be just around the corner. The Sailor Senshi would be at the Hikawa Shrine reflecting on events and topics from the previous episodes: Who the Shadow Senshi are, the revelations told to them by Gaia, and Usagi’s memory loss. Luna and Artemis would state that they’ve been conducting further research in the Moon Castle’s library to see what more they could learn from its vast array of tomes, but of all the information they’ve gleaned, none of it had any info on the Shadow Senshi. Stranger still is that all of their enemies have been particularly quiet lately, as there have been no villainous activities of any kind for quite some time, as though the bad guys all just gave up and left. Some of the Senshi would find this unusual peacefulness quite discomforting.

At this point, Rei’s grandfather would pop in from around the corner to ask if any of the young ladies would like anything, to which they would kindly decline his offer. Yuichiro would also pass bye, giving Rei a friendly greeting, but then reminding himself to not be too friendly, and would walk off to continue working, leaving a sighing Rei behind.

As snowflakes would continue to fall, Minako would the subject would change to raise everyone’s moodiness by commenting on the flakes’ beauty, and reminding everyone that Christmas will be here very soon. Hotaru would wonder why Minako brought that up since, to her, Christmas is just another day of the year. This would startle the other girls, who would then ask Hotaru if she’s ever gotten to enjoy the holiday season. Hotaru would reveal that she never really thought of this time of year as being all that special since her father was always so busy with his work that he and Hotaru only ever treated Christmas like any other non-school day of the year. This would really surprise Usagi, who’d feel sorry for Hotaru having never got to enjoy the holidays, or experience a Christmas party. Hotaru would reassure her that she’s never really thought about it before so it’s never bothered her, since she didn’t really have any friends to think about this with before until… until she met Chibiusa. This reminder of Chibiusa would make Hotaru feel a little sad, and would prompt Usagi to want to cheer Hotaru up. Usagi would decide that she’d want to throw a Christmas Eve party just for Hotaru! The others would jump in and want to help too, except for Haruka, who’d feel that a party wouldn’t be such a good idea at this time. But since Usagi would be so dead set on doing this for Hotaru, Haruka would sigh and shrug it off, letting Usagi and the others do it while still not agreeing with their being so carefree at a time like this.

Hotaru would then start to wonder how Chibiusa is doing right now, which would lead to a scene transition. In the 30th Century, Christmastime would be in effect as well, with Princess Small Lady excited for the year’s annual royal Christmas party hosted at the Crystal Palace by her parents, Neo Queen Serenity and King Endymion. She’d be especially excited since, this year, she is to receive some very special gifts from each of her parents and each of the four Guardian Senshi; ones that recent events have proven her to be both old enough and mature enough to have them.

Back in the 20th Century, Professor Tomoe would receive a phone call from Hotaru to tell him the news of what Usagi and the others are doing for her this year, and to ask his permission for her to go to their party. Tomoe would think the party is a great idea and would happily permit her to go. Upon ending the call, Tomoe would silently smile with happy relief that his daughter is much happier than she used to be.

Elsewhere, Usagi and the others would be busy trying to get this party going. After having to beg her parents for permission to hold to the party at their house (things would still be uneasy between Usagi and her parents), Usagi and the others would start their planning and shopping. During all this, Usagi would pop into Fruits Parlor Crown for a quick bite and happen upon Naru and Umino, who would have already made their own holiday plans for this year. After Usagi would tell them about her own plans, Unazuki would also overhear Usagi’s for a party and think that what she’s doing for her friend is a wonderful idea. Motoki would soon enter and say hi to everyone there before Usagi would realize that she’d have to get back to shopping for the party. She’d say bye to everyone and head out.

Upon her exiting, however, a large commotion would occur in the nearby downtown area. The Ami, Minako, Rei, and Makoto would already be headed that direction and would meet up with Usagi along the way. The Shadow Senshi would appear and cause wanton destruction to draw out the Sailor Senshi. The five Inners would transform and go to confront them, with the Outers joining them, having also seen the attack. The Shadow Senshi would formally introduce themselves to the Sailor Team: “Shi to konton no Ankoku Senshi Shadow Moon, Shadow Nebula, Shadow Nova, Shadow Quasar, Shadow Pulsar! Kage no kawatte hakai yo!” (“We are the Darkness Soldiers of death and chaos: Shadow Moon, Shadow Nebula, Shadow Nova, Shadow Quasar, Shadow Pulsar! On the shadow’s behalf, you will be destroyed!”)

Sailor Pluto would definitely recognize Shadow Moon as the one she fought in the space-time corridor, which Shadow Moon would confirm. The Shadow Senshi would explain that they want the Sailor Senshi’s Sailor Crystals, which the Sailor Senshi would again deny them. Shadow Moon would assure the Sailor Senshi that they will have the Sailor Crystals, one way or another, and would attack. The Sailor Senshi would try to fight back but the Shadow Senshi would once again prove their superiority. Even in their weakened states, the Sailor Senshi would still refuse to give up, no matter how badly they’d get beaten. Before the Shadow Senshi would be able to finish the Sailor Senshi, a golden rose would strike the ground between the two teams of Senshi, its golden petals glowing and momentarily blinding the Shadow Senshi. The Golden Knight would make his dramatic entrance and attack with his Ouryuken, inflicting mild injuries upon the Shadow Senshi. Shadow Moon would recall how “this one” is different from the others, being strong enough to do some harm to the Shadow Senshi. The Golden Knight would then use Smoking Bomber Mirage to create a large smokescreen that would both shield himself and his comrades from sight and sting the eyes of the Shadow Senshi. The Sailor Senshi would use this brief state of confusion to get way to safety, thanking the Golden Knight for the save, leaving behind a very furious team of Shadow Senshi, who would warp away to get out of the eye-searing smoke cloud.

Back inside the Moon Castle, the Shadow Senshi would vent their frustration. Shadow Moon would try to get her wits back together and reassure the others that they aren’t giving up so easily. They WILL get the Sailor Crystals from the Sailor Senshi. Shadow Quasar, however, would remain unconvinced given their recent track record. Shadow Moon would ask if Quasar has forgotten why they were created in the first place. This would prompt Shadow Pulsar to recall their origin, how they were created by their boss in the far future and sent back in time to go after the Sailor Crystals of the Sailor Team (by either capturing or destroying the crystals), so as to both secure their boss’s existence and to erase their boss’s archenemy from ever existing, thereby rewriting history to grant their boss a complete and total victory. Quasar would retort that, so far, they haven’t accomplished any of that, given that they had first gone to the wrong era, mistaking the peaceful 30th Century (“Crystal Tokyo” or whatever it was called) for an easy target, not knowing that that era would present much more resistance than they’d expected. Shadow Nebula would argue that that plan had seemed like an easy job: They’d kidnap the princess of that era and hold her to ransom for the Sailor Crystals. They couldn’t have known that that princess was also Sailor Senshi herself (one who even lacked a Sailor Crystal at that), who was able to escape from the Shadow Senshi and summon her allies to overcome the Shadow Senshi, forcing them to retreat. Quasar would argue that that means their future intel was faulty, that it shouldn’t be missing such vital pieces of information. Nebula would argue that they did still get out of there once they’d realized how much easier their chances would be in the much less developed 20th Century. The era where the Sailor Crystals were first discovered would surely prove easier to handle, especially with the Sailor Senshi being scattered for their castle missions, which their future intel did know about. But Quasar would retort that each of them still failed on those missions as well. And where was Shadow Moon during all this? She was still in the space-time corridor, having not yet emerged in the 20th Century. Shadow Moon would argue that she stayed behind to deal with someone else who had followed them through time from their original era. And after she got rid of that pursuer, she had to deal with yet another pest in her way of reaching this 20th Century era. But Shadow Moon would reassure the others that she did get rid of their pursuer, catching her off guard and knocking her to parts unknown within the corridor. All of them would then notice how unusually quiet the otherwise normally manic Shadow Nova has been, and would ask her what she’s thinking about. Nova would answer that she’s been wondering what they would gain from getting the Sailor Crystals, since they know history would be changed if they succeed, meaning that if their future is changed so that their boss is given an automatic victory, then wouldn’t they be erasing their very existence since they only exist because of their boss’s lack of a victory? This higher level of thinking coming from the typically simpleminded Nova would stun the others, who’d then brush it off after Nova would express having given herself a headache from thinking too much. Shadow Moon would assure the others that, once they’d have the Sailor Crystals, all this (the castles) would be theirs to rule, so long as they’d stay out of the way of their boss’s further plans to come. She’d then proceed to discuss a new plan with the other four, saying that there’s more than one way to make the Sailor Senshi come to them.

Back in the 30th Century, the royal Christmas party would be underway, with Small Lady enjoying the festivities. Neo-Queen Serenity and King Endymion would be on their thrones and would quiet down everyone to make an announcement: It is time to present their gifts to the princess. Excited, Small Lady would approach her parents and the queen would stand up and step towards her daughter. As the queen would begin to speak, the party would be interrupted by the sudden arrival of Sailor Pluto (the one native to the 30th Century, who’d be in her Super Sailor Pluto form). Pluto would beg pardon from the king and queen for the interruption as she’d need to speak with them urgently. The king and queen would permit her to speak and the three would step aside to speak in private, much to Small Lady’s disappointment. But once the three would finish, they would call Small Lady over to speak with them, changing her mood from sadness to confusion.

Back in the 20th Century, Ikuko and Kenji would be discussing how they’ve been treating Usagi lately and if they’ve really been handling this situation the right way. Sure, their daughter’s lied to them all this time, but was it for a good cause? Shingo would drop in and intrude on their discussion to try again to get them to understand why superheroes live lives of secrecy for the sake of their loved ones, when all three would suddenly be scooped up and abducted by Shadow Moon’s wicked hand. Elsewhere, Naru and Umino would be out walking together spending the holidays as a couple when Shadow Nebula would scoop them up as well. At Fruits Parlor Crown, Motoki would be leaving after having finished a meal, saying bye to his sister Unazuki on his way out, when Shadow Nova would likewise scoop up the two of them. At the Hikawa Shrine, Rei’s grandfather would be talking with Yuichiro about the distant behavior he’s shown towards Rei recently when Shadow Quasar would scoop both of them up too. And finally, just as Hotaru would be arriving back home, her father would be scooped up by Shadow Pulsar, who’d see Hotaru arrive on the scene and leave her with a warning before warping away: “If don’t want your father and everyone else to die, come face us on the Moon!”

Hotaru would contact the others and alert them to what’s happened, at which point both Usagi and Rei would have arrived back at their respective homes to find them unusually empty. The nine Sailor Senshi, Mamoru, and the two cats would regroup to Sailor Teleport up to the Moon. Once there, they’d arrive to find all ten frightened victims tied up and hanging down from one of the high balconies of the Moon Castle. Hovering in mid air between the ten victims and the ten Senshi on the ground below, the Shadow Senshi would demand one last time that Sailor Senshi surrender their Sailor Crystals or all of these people will die! The Sailor Senshi would be stuck with a dilemma, but Uranus would be the first to speak against the Shadow Senshi, refusing to surrender. The other Sailor Senshi would argue that they can’t let all their loved ones die, to which Uranus would argue that the lives of many outweigh a few sacrifices. Overhearing this argument, the Shadow Senshi would laugh, calling Uranus a narrow-minded fool for thinking that they’d stop at just these ten. The Shadow Senshi would declare that, if the Sailor Senshi choose to let these ten be sacrificed, the Shadow Senshi will only continue to kill more innocent lives, even if they have to kill every single human, animal, and lifeform on Earth to get the Sailor Senshi to surrender their Sailor Crystals, by which point the Sailor Senshi would have failed their mission to protect all life on Earth. Therefore, are the Sailor Crystals really worth more than the billions of innocent lives on Earth? Angered, Uranus would leap up at the Shadow Senshi to try and attack them, but the Shadow Senshi would grab her, restraining her in mid-air, and force out her Uranus Crystal, de-transforming her, much to the horrors of everyone watching this. Once they’d have it, they’d let go of the unconscious Haruka to let her drop. Neptune would cry out and leap up to catch her.

Having acquired the Uranus Crystal, the Shadow Senshi would gloat that all is hopeless for the Sailor Senshi, but Naru would yell down towards the Sailor Senshi, telling them to not give up and don’t worry about her and the others, for they aren’t as important as the Sailor Senshi’s mission. But Sailor Moon would yell back up to her to tell her she’s wrong. All ten of them are very precious to her, so much so that Sailor Moon is willing to give up everything to save them. All ten hostages would be moved by these words. The remaining Senshi would all agree with Sailor Moon and (reluctantly) summon their Sailor Crystals to give them up, de-transforming in the process. Upon seeing this, Umino, Motoki, Unazuki, and Rei’s grandpa would all discover that the Sailor Senshi are all people they know and recognize! The Shadow Senshi would bask in the satisfaction of this victory. But before anyone could give up their crystals, a loud cry of “Pink Ladies Freezing Kiss!” would sound off, immediately followed by the Shadow Senshi suddenly frozen solid, dropping to the ground like rocks. Five blurs would streak passed all ten hostages, grabbing each one of them and setting them down safely atop the balcony, having had their bond cut loose. Everyone would look up to see five silhouettes standing on the balcony, the centermost one bearing a familiar shape and voice: Sailor Chibi Moon.


Episode 47 would be Part 2 of this two-parter, titled “Holy Night! The Great Battle of Twenty Senshi!”

Everyone would look up to see five newcomers having just arrived on the scene, the centermost one revealed to be none other than Sailor Chibi Moon, sporting a newly-acquired Eternal form! Chibi Moon would leap down from the balcony to greet her friends on the ground. She would de-transform into Chibiusa. Hotaru would run up to Chibiusa and the two would hug, having missed each other. The others would ask Chibiusa what she’s doing here, to which Chibiusa would indicate the still-frozen Shadow Senshi, stating that she came here after them. Chibiusa would explain that the Shadow Senshi had once tried to kidnap and hold her to ransom back in her time, but she was able to outsmart them and her parents overpowered them. But before the Shadow Senshi could be detained, they escaped through time and came here. The Sailor Pluto of the 30th Century had been trying to locate them ever since. When asked if Chibiusa knows who they are or where they came from, Chibiusa would say that she does not know. Just that they showed up one day out of nowhere demanding the Sailor Crystals, and their disappearance was similar to how they arrived, suggesting that they might have come from an even different point in time. In any case, once the Shadow Senshi were located, Chibiusa and her new team were sent after them. Upon mentioning her new team, Chibiusa’s four compatriots would leap down to join her, revealing themselves (to the Inners shock) to be… the Amazoness Quartet! Chibiusa would calm them down and assure them that the Quartet is her team now. They were always meant to be her team, but Queen Nehellenia had gotten to them first. They aren’t bad guys anymore.

Chibiusa would then flashback to when she was called over to speak with her parents and Pluto. They would tell her that the five troublemakers who tried to kidnap her before have gone to the 20th Century, to “that time”. Small Lady would insist that she go after them, knowing that if the 20th Century is in danger then Usagi and all her friends from back then are in danger as well, which means that this future era is also in danger. The king and queen would admire their daughter’s compassion and, after recalling how she faired against the five enemies before, would tell her that they do indeed want her to go. Overjoyed, Small Lady would start to run off, but Neo Queen Serenity would stop her, telling her that, before she goes, she must first accept the gifts that are to be given to her by both her mother and the four Guardian Senshi, while her father’s gift can wait until her return. End flashback.

The Quartet would introduce themselves as Sailor Ceres, Sailor Pallas, Sailor Vesta, and Sailor Juno. Together, they are… the Sailor Quartet! The four would de-transform into their civilian forms (seen in some episodes of SuperS) to show that they have changed, no longer having their Amazoness forms. Chibiusa would state that the four were given to her by the future Sailors Mercury, Venus, Mars, and Jupiter, and would show the others the gift given to her by her mother: The Pink Moon Crystal, her own Sailor Crystal, which gave her her new form. Cere Cere, Ves Ves, and Jun Jun would speak of how the four of them were personally trained by the Guardian Senshi of the 30th Century ever since the Quartet first became Sailor Senshi. Palla Palla, meanwhile, would have her attention drawn away from the others by something shiny on the ground: Haruka’s Uranus Crystal, which had been dropped by the Shadow Senshi upon the first shock of their being frozen by Chibiusa and the Quartet. Palla Palla would pick it up and give it back to Haruka after being told what it was.

Speaking of the Shadow Senshi, the five of them would then finally break free of their icy prisons, more outraged than ever. All fifteen good guys would turn to face them, with the Shadow Senshi likewise acknowledging all of them. With a look of determination in everyone’s eyes, an awesome FIFTEEN transformation sequences would occur, accompanied by an awesome song like “Sailor Team no Theme” or “La Soldier”. Eyeing all fifteen Senshi, the Shadow Senshi would cast off any doubts they might have had about confronting such a large number and would charge forward! So too would their opponents! A large 15-on-5 battle would begin:

  • Sailor Moon, Golden Knight, and Sailor Chibi Moon vs. Shadow Moon
  • Sailor Mercury, Sailor Saturn, and Sailor Pallas vs. Shadow Nebula
  • Sailor Venus, Sailor Uranus, and Sailor Ceres vs. Shadow Nova
  • Sailor Mars, Sailor Neptune, and Sailor Vesta vs. Shadow Quasar
  • Sailor Jupiter, Sailor Pluto, and Sailor Juno vs. Shadow Pulsar

And this time, since it would be 3-on-1, the good guys would have more of a fighting chance since previous 2-on-1 battles with the Shadow Senshi weren’t enough.

High up above on the balcony, Shingo, Naru, Yuuichirou, and Umino would be watching the fight below, while Motoki and Unazuki would be tending to the four adults. Umino would be in complete bewilderment over Usagi and all her friends being the Sailor Senshi, while Naru would be playfully poking at the fact that she found out before him, much to his astonishment. Yuichiro would be remarking how incredible this whole situation is, while Shingo would be fully invested in the battle going on below and how awesome it is. Rei’s grandfather would be baffled that Rei is a Sailor Senshi, and would wonder why she never told him before. Motoki would try to assure him that she must have meant well by keeping this a secret. Unazuki would agree, and still find this whole thing to be amazing. Ikuko, however, would just want to go home, believing that none of this would have happened had her daughter never become Sailor Moon. This would spur Professor Tomoe, who had been quiet up until now, to speak up and say, “Don’t say that! Don’t you dare say something like that!” Kenji would get defensive, telling Tomoe not to yell at his wife like that, asking him who is he to say such things. Tomoe would argue that it is because of those girls fighting down below that each one of them is alive and well today. Those girls have saved many lives countless times, everyone here included. Kenji and Ikuko would argue that if they had all just lived ordinary lives, they wouldn’t have gotten involved in any of this, with everyone here still being safe at home. Tomoe would state that they’re wrong. Maybe they’d still be home right now, yes, but he wouldn’t. Tomoe would confess that he was once like the five evil ones fighting on the ground below. He was once a terrible person who committed several heinous acts that he isn’t proud of. But when his plans grew out of his control, he himself was nearly killed. The only reason he’s alive today is because of Sailor Moon having saved him, even despite his having been their enemy back then. “I didn’t deserve it, yet you’re daughter… saved my life. And the life of my daughter, who is down there right now fighting alongside your daughter, and your granddaughter, to save all of our lives. And I look at what they’re doing, and all that they’ve done, and realize how much better they are than the rest of the world. This world needs people like them, for they aren’t just saving lives, but changing them, affecting them for the better. Your daughter didn’t just save me, she healed me. Your daughter, your granddaughter, and my daughter, are more than heroes. They inspire hope for everyone, hope for a better world.” Yuichiro would speak up to agree with Tomoe, stating that Rei has both saved his life and inspired him before as well. Naru would join in with her own life having been saved by the Sailor Senshi, many times. Shingo would chime in, declaring that he used to think his big sister was stupid, but now he realizes that she’s not just a hero, she’s his hero. The one person he most admires. Motoki, Unazuki, and Umino would agree with this as well. Rei’s grandfather would be the first parent to agree, now convinced that Rei kept her secret from him for a good reason. Kenji and Ikuko would be speechless, touched and impressed by these words about their daughter, never aware that she had such an influence on people.

Down below, the fighting would continue. Shadow Moon would grow sick of this frustrating battle and decide to try something new. Seeing the ten civilians still up on the balcony, she would leap up into the air to fly towards them. Seeing where she’d be heading, Sailor Moon would fly up after her, leaving Sailor Chibi Moon and the Golden Knight the ground behind. The ten civilians would see Shadow Moon fly up to them, but Sailor Moon would block her path, clashing her Moon Power Tiare with Shadow Moon’s sword. Shadow Moon would question why Sailor Moon would go to such lengths to protect these people when the ongoing battle below should be her greater concern. Sailor Moon would argue that it’s as she told Shadow Moon before; all of these people are precious to her. She would die before letting Shadow Moon lay a hand on any of them. Usagi’s parents would hear their daughter speak this while defending them and be touched even further. Shadow Moon would retort that Sailor Moon is a fool letting go of the larger battle to save a few worthless maggots, and then would push Sailor Moon backwards, knocking her onto the balcony with the others. As she’d get back up, Shadow Moon would prepare to blast them all, but a “Silent Wall!” would block her attack. Sailor Saturn would appear on the balcony’s edge, shielding everyone with her attack. Sailor Mars likewise would rise up behind Shadow Moon and attack her with the Suzaku Daggers, stopping Shadow Moon’s attack. In this quick moment, Sailors Moon, Saturn, and Mars would all use a combined “Silver Moon Crystal Power Therapy Kiss”, “Death Reborn Revolution” and Mars’s still-unnamed Suzaku Dagger fireblast attack to force Shadow Moon back downward, impacting the ground hard. The three Sailor Senshi would land of the balcony’s edge and turn to acknowledge their loved ones. One by one, each of the ten would give them a wish of good luck, with Usagi’s parents being the last two to wish them so. Happy that her parents are finaly okay with her being a Sailor Senshi, Sailor Moon would leap down with her two comrades to rejoin the battle.

Down on the ground, the fallen Shadow Moon would regain consciousness and order the others to regroup with her. Surrounded on all sides by the fifteen Senshi, the Shadow Senshi would be told that it’s over, that they can’t win at this point, to which the Shadow Senshi would remind the Sailor Senshi that they meant what they said before: They are willing to kill everyone on Earth to get what they want. They would prepare to depart the Moon and retreat to both heal their wounds and later begin their slaughter of Earth. But Sailor Pluto would have come prepared for this, having anticipated the next time that the Shadow Senshi would try to warp away. Using her Garnet Rod, she would use her “Garnet Ball” technique to indefinitely shield the entire area (I say indefinitely as she would have to manually turn it off since the ball could remain intact on its own unless broken by an external force), trapping everyone inside, cutting off the Shadow Senshi’s warping ability. With nowhere to run, the Shadow Senshi would again be ordered to give up and surrender. But the Shadow Senshi would just laugh, asking the Sailor Senshi if they even know how the Shadow Senshi even came to this era in the first place. Though they can’t leave the Moon physically, they have another exit: Time itself. The Shadow Senshi would raise their arms and force open a time portal overhead, through which they would intend to escape to another era, where they could continue to terrorize the Sailor Senshi for all eternity until they get what they wanted. The Sailor Senshi would have to act quickly to stop them from going through the portal, with the Chibi Moon and the Amazon Quartet trying once more to freeze the Shadow Senshi with another “Pink Ladies Freezing Kiss”. The Shadow Senshi, however, would be ready for this attack and, while it would indeed slow them down, it would fail to freeze them solid this time. The Guardian Senshi would attempt to use their Legendary Weapons to stop them, which would likewise slow them down but still not be enough to stop them fully. Sailor Pluto, however, would ask Chibi Moon if she has a Space-Time Key on hand, which Chibi Moon would confirm and give to Pluto. Pluto would then take the key and her rod and bring them together, trying to force the time portal to close. The other Sailor Senshi and the Golden Knight would continue their efforts to distract the Shadow Senshi and keep them at bay long enough for the Pluto to close the portal. At last, with a cry of “Dark Dome Close”, Pluto would succeed at shutting the portal, cutting the Shadow Senshi permanently off from the space-time corridor.

Infuriated over this, the Shadow Senshi would realize that this has become their final stand, deciding that if they are going to die here, they will take down everyone here with them. Channeling all their energy together as a group, their individual humanoid forms would break down and converge into one giant mass of blackness, intending to consume everything and everyone nearby in a massive suicide attack. Intimidated by this sight, the Sailor Senshi would all gather together, preparing themselves for what is to come. Whilst gathering together, Venus’s Byakko Kunai and Mercury’s Genbu Shield would come in contact with one another, causing the two weapons to glow. Jupiter would recall seeing this happen before when the kunai touched her Seiryuu Sword back when they fought Typhos and Shadow Senshi together. Inspired, the Guardian Senshi would place all four of their weapons together, causing all four to glow with more power than ever. This would further inspire all fifteen Senshi to combine their attacks together to finish off the Shadow Senshi for good. As the black shadowy mass would raise upward (with its eerie presence giving off an unsettlingly familiar feeling of chaotic terror to the Sailor Senshi), the four Guardian Senshi would prepare a combined attack from their four weapons brought together, the four Outer Senshi would likewise join the three Talismans with the Silence Glaive for their own unified attack, the Sailor Quartet would prepare an “Amazoness Jungle Arrow” attack, and Sailor Moon, Sailor Chibi Moon, and the Golden Knight would prepare a combined attack of their own. When the black shadowy mass would shoot down towards the heroes, the four unified attacks would all be fired, striking back the mass in a tremendous array of colorful energy. The two forces of good and evil energies would collide, trying to force back each other, until the force of evil would finally give way to the energies of good, being utterly annihilated in a brilliant explosion.

However, said explosion would rock the Moon Castle, causing the balcony to break loose from the building, bringing down all ten civilians with it. As they would fall, the nine Sailor Senshi and Golden Knight of the present day would leap up towards the falling debris to catch all of them:

  • Sailor Moon would catch Ikuko
  • The Golden Knight would catch Kenji
  • Sailor Mercury would catch Shingo
  • Sailor Venus would catch Naru
  • Sailor Mars would catch Yuichiro
  • Sailor Jupiter would catch Motoki
  • Sailor Saturn would catch her father
  • Sailor Uranus would catch Rei’s grandfather (much to his disappointment, which would confuse Uranus)
  • Sailor Neptune would catch Umino
  • And Sailor Pluto would catch Unazuki

In the aftermath (at a point after the Sailor Senshi would have explained almost everything to the ten civilians), the Christmas Eve party for Hotaru would commence at the Tsukino house with everyone invited, including the ten civilians and Chibiusa’s team (so, yeah, there would be 25 people all in one house). A quick montage would show a bunch of things happening at the party: Games, laughter, fun, etc. It would be Hotaru’s first ever very merry Christmas. And afterward, the present day Senshi would say their farewells to Chibiusa and the Quartet, who would return to the 30th Century through the same door they came through: the Space-Time Door inside the Moon Castle. Upon their departure, however, no one would take notice of a small orb of light that would flutter out of the door just as it would close.

And back in the 30th Century, Princess Small Lady and the Quartet would return to the party from whence they came. King Endymion would approach his daughter and indicate that his gift to her is about to step out from the doorway in front of her. To Small Lady’s utter delight, entering the room would be a handsome young man dressed in white clothes: Helios.

Merry Christmas, Small Lady.

Merry Christmas, Hotaru.

Merry Christmas to everyone! (In hindsight, this post would have been far more appropriate had it been posted in December ^_^' )


To be concluded...

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And now, we finally come to the final five episodes of the season, all based on the finale I originally wrote in my previous posts.


Episode 48 would pick up after the Winter break with school back in session. Though, this episode would occur on Friday. There would still be no signs of the Primordial Imperium since the Sailor Senshi’s last encounter with them back in episode 45. At Sagittarius Zero Star, Tartarus would be in his private chamber consulting other agents of the Imperium based on other planets, alerting them that the time is near for them to deliver their final energy shipments to the Galaxy Cauldron, at which Nyx will soon be ready to receive them with the Obsidian Crystal. All this time throughout the season, whenever Tartarus had not been in the field, this is the secret task that he was doing that I first mentioned way back in the description of episode 7. He has been coordinating the plans of all of the Imperium’s emissaries stationed throughout the universe, monitoring their progress and communicating with them on their delivering of energy shipments. Thus, it is finally revealed that Earth has not been their only target this whole time, but it has been high priority due to it being the site of where their master was felled before and the home location of those who felled him, explaining why the Imperium went to so much trouble to attack it.

Upon entering Tartarus’s chamber to ask when the next phase of Tartarus’s plan will be put into motion, Erebus would be stunned to learn that his brother has been secretly carrying out clandestine operations on his own all this time. Tartarus would argue that Erebus didn’t know because he didn’t need to know. At the time that Tartarus had begun coordinating the Imperium’s other agents, Erebus wasn’t in charge like he is now and had no reason to be involved. And after Erebus took over, Tartarus kept these additional operations in reserve as a precaution just in case Erebus couldn’t handle being in charge. Erebus had already had enough on his plate in trying to prove himself as a leader that Tartarus felt that dropping a whole other set of responsibilities for his brother to deal with would be too much for him. Erebus would feel offended by this notion, accusing his brother of having never believed in him as a leader. Tartarus would answer back saying that, like he said before, he would only resume command if Erebus were to willingly relinquish the position back to him. But since Erebus always seemed like he had to prove himself, Tartarus would say that it seems to him that it isn’t he who doesn’t believe in Erebus, but that it is Erebus who doesn’t believe in himself. Tartarus would then tell Erebus that the reason he stepped down and let Erebus take over in the first place was because he saw potential in Erebus; potential that could have led them to victory. Tartarus wanted to see if Erebus really did have what it took to succeed him as a leader. But now, after all this time, Tartarus believes that Erebus can never be a good leader if he continues to doubt himself the way he has. Erebus would snap back, demanding Tartarus tell him what he (Erebus) is missing in his leadership skills. Why can’t he be the kind of leader he wants to be? Tartarus’s answer: “Because you lack the conviction needed to be a good leader. Without conviction, you are nothing more than a pretender to the throne.” Tartarus would then walk past the speechless Erebus, exiting his chamber to prepare the next step of his plan to turn Sailor Moon to their side, “Phase Three: Convergence”.

At school, Usagi, Ami, Minako, Makoto, and the cats would be hanging out with each other during lunch. Naru and Umino would spot them and join them. Umino would still be ecstatic over Usagi and the others being Sailor Senshi and would beg them to let him help them on anything he can. He would ask them if there’s been any recent activity he might be able to help them with. At first, they’d try to tell him that nothing’s come up lately so there isn’t anything he could help them out with, but then Ami would recall that Usagi had suffered her memory loss back before the break. This would intrigue Umino greatly, who would press them for more info about it. Initially, the girls wouldn’t want to talk about it, but once Umino would get them thinking about it, they’d really start trying to put the pieces together about how it came about. They’d recall that the last thing to happen before they noticed Usagi’s memories starting to fade was Usagi’s bumping into Ryuu Susano’o. This would get the girls to all start talking about Ryuu, like how he’s always kinda given Makoto the creeps, and how they don’t really know what classes he’s taking. In fact, all of the girls and Umino realize that Ryuu isn’t in any of their classes at all. This would prompt Umino to want and try and look up the school’s file on Ryuu to look for more information on him. Given this new task, Umino would run off to see what he could find.

Then the girls would start to think back to when Ryuu first transferred into the school. Thinking of what else was going on back then, they’d recall that it was shortly before Typhos first appeared and blackmailed Usagi into working for him. Everyone would then wonder if it’s possible that Ryuu might just be Typhos, since Typhos has previously made it a point to gloat about finding out their identities somehow. Going undercover as Ryuu would be a good way to do that. Until Umino could get back to them with more info, everyone would decide to be very wary of Ryuu when next they’d see him.

Meanwhile, Tartarus would finish giving Typhos his instructions for Phase Three, ordering him to capture and bring Sailor Moon, the Daughter of Selene, to this place. Gladly, Typhos accepts this mission and teleports to the Earth, arriving at the Juban Public High School and assuming his Ryuu form. Shortly, he would comb the hallways looking for Usagi, finally spotting her around a corner. As written in my older posts, he’d approach her to speak with her, Usagi would try to kindly excuse herself (but instead of doing so because she suspects him to like her as I originally wrote, she would try to excuse herself because of her suspicions of him being Typhos) but get temporarily caught in his bewitching eyes, and saved by Makoto pulling her aside and away from Ryuu.

And after school, Ryuu would confront Usagi again like I originally wrote. But rather than using knockout gas breath, he would instead trip her up, pretend it was an accident and beg her forgiveness, plead to her with a voice of concern, and amid all his apologies, he would take her hand and use the Obsidian Rings on each of his ring fingers (in their disguised blue-jeweled forms) to drain a tiny portion of Usagi energy; just enough to knock her out. Though, he would regret doing so since he loathes the idea of draining her life away (as seen back in episode 38).

Elsewhere, Umino would report Ami, Makoto, and Minako with the info he was able to glean from Ryuu’s file. Or rather, with the revelation that Ryuu has no file, for there is no “Ryuu Susano’o” on record as a student attending the school. This confirmation further reaffirms the others’ suspicions, and they try to contact Usagi with their communicators to tell her the news, but to their horror, they get no response from her.

At the cavern base of the Primordial Imperium, Usagi would awaken to find herself in a dark room surrounded by Tartarus in front of her, Typhos (unmasked/visorless, revealing his Ryuu face and confirming Usagi’s supicions) behind her, Erebus on her left, and Nyx on her right. Usagi would ask Tartarus what the meaning of this is, and Tartarus would request that the others leave him to speak alone to the Daughter of Selene. Erebus would protest this at first, but would comply when Tartarus spells out that this is part of the plan.

Tartarus would explain to Usagi that, now that he knows her to be the “Daughter of Selene”, the Imperium must escalate its efforts if it is achieve its goals. His referring to her by this moniker would puzzle her, prompting him to clarify that he is referring to her being the daughter of Queen Serenity, otherwise known as the incarnation of the goddess Selene. Usagi would ask if Tartarus knew her mother, to which Tartarus would reply that he didn’t know her directly, but through reputation, stating that he knows that Usagi’s crystal poses a dire threat to the Imperium’s cause, one that they intend to remove. Usagi would think that he means that they intend to kill her, but Tartarus would put those worries of hers to rest by clarifying that she is to join them, just as Sailor Mercury had before her. Usagi would argue that if he intends to brainwash her like he did to Ami, then he is a hypocrite since there is no honor in such wickedness. Tartarus would retort that there is no honor greater than to see his master’s will carried out to the end, by any means necessary. Usagi would say that she had hoped that she could possibly get through to Tartarus, viewing him as being different from his allies. But she guesses she was wrong and declares that he really has no honor! Tartarus would respond in kind with a short gust of energy blasted from his palm, knocking Usagi backward. Tartarus would tell that, if she is going to face him, she must transform to her proper combat form, so that she and him can fight as equals.

Usagi would respond in kind with a cry of “Silver Moon Crystal Power…”, but would be cut off by Tartarus yelling “NOW!”, prompting Erebus, Nyx, and Typhos to emerge from the shadows and join Tartarus in a combined blast of energy fired at Usagi from all four directions. Usagi would struggle to finish her transformation, getting out the “M-Make…” part before collapsing and succumbing to the fourfold spell being placed on her.

The scene would cut back to the 30th Century. At the Crystal Palace, Neo Queen Serenity would be walking into the throne room until being struck by a severe headache. At first, she’d try to brush it off and get back to her feet, but then the pain would spike and cause her to pass out, collapsing on the floor to everyone’s horror. Small Lady would run toward her fallen mother, but then she too would succumb to the same sickness and pass out on the floor as well.

Back in the 20th Century, the other girls regroup, having split up to search for Usagi with no luck. However, they’d get a call from Luna, who’d be at the Secret Base monitoring cases of people collapsing in the downtown area. The girls would head there to investigate, transforming along the way. Upon arriving (along with the Outers and the Golden Knight), everyone would arrive to see the cause of the mass energy drain: The four members of the Primordial Imperium have come themselves, along with a surprise fifth member: Princess Sailor Moon.

As mentioned in my original posts, the Imperium would have Princess Sailor Moon attack the Sailor Senshi, with their being unable to fight her, much less stop her. They would try to get through to her (with Mamoru seemingly having the most success at trying), but to no avail. She’d beat them all, even the Outers, with her newfound powers. And before she could finish them off, Tartarus would stop her, declaring the battle over since the Sailor Senshi are all defeated and can do nothing to stop the Imperium at this point. Naturally, Erebus would be agitated by Tartarus still sparring their enemies, but Nyx would calm him down and convince him to let it go. Typhos, meanwhile, would be loving every moment of this. Tartarus would declare that it’s time to return to their work at the Galaxy Cauldron, which Luna would hear him say (instead of Mamoru putting a tracking device on Princess Sailor Moon; another change from my original posts).

One more scene cut to the 30th Century would show both NQS and Small Lady placed on beds with the king, the Guardian Senshi, Helios, and the Sailor Quartet at a loss for what to do.


Episode 49 would continue where my original posts left off with the aftermath of the fight with Princess Sailor Moon. In my old posts, I had mentioned that everyone would be frequently having a vision around this time, but I’ve nixed that in favor of placing it earlier, back when everyone first got their Sailor Crystals. That vision from back then is meant to be the one everyone would be having around this time.

Anyway, like in my older posts, this episode would begin with Princess Sailor Moon being brought to the Galaxy Cauldron and told what it is. She’d feed it the energy she took from Azabu-Juban (though, this time the people weren’t all drained so much as to kill them all, but they were rendered comatose and hospitalized) and then would come another change from my original posts. Instead of her needing to suck the Earth dry of its energy, she’d instead take over Nyx’s job of channeling all of the energy shipped to the Galaxy Cauldron by the Imperium’s other forces out in space, since the Silver Moon Crystal is far more efficient and effective than the Obsidian Crystal. This would leave Nyx a little irked at being replaced, but Tartarus would put her at ease when he’d explain that, once Sailor Moon has served her purpose, she will then be offered to their master to become Chaos’s host vessel allowing their master to finally be revived on the physical plane. Though Nyx would be fine with that, Typhos would secretly be angered at both the prospect of his losing Sailor Moon to Chaos and her getting all of Chaos’s power when he’s the one who want them for himself.

And around here is where Erebus would finally fight Tartarus, only now instead of fighting him specifically over the decision to not kill the Sailor Senshi, but also over the notion that Tartarus has thought of everything except one thing: He has proceeded with all of this without Erebus’s approval. Erebus would once more accuse Tartarus of acting on his own as though he were in charge again, which Tartarus would once again try to refute but Erebus would cut him off, asking him what right he has to decide how the Imperium operates when he is no longer in charge. This would lead to the argument about whether the decision to keep the Sailor Senshi alive is really what Chaos wants or what Tartarus wants. Erebus would accuse Tartarus of treachery, having let his honor keep the Imperium from success. Tartarus would take offense to this accusation and, with both brothers’ eyes glowing with black fire (influenced by their close proximity to the dark energies of the Cauldron further corrupting their minds and keeping them from thinking clearly), the two would clash swords.

During this fight, with Typhos, Nyx, and Princess Sailor Moon watching, there would be a point where both of Erebus’s Obsidian Rings are knocked off his fingers and fall to the ground. Typhos would see them and pick them up when no one would be looking, keeping them for himself. And at some other point during the fight, instead of having Tartarus command Princess Sailor Moon to fire at Erebus, Typhos would grow bored of this fight and decide to help end it, firing the blast at Erebus himself, but doing so from a position that made it look, from Nyx’s perspective, as though Princess Sailor Moon had done it (no one would have seen the blast be fired, but Nyx would at least have seen what direction it came from). Being out of his right mind, Tartarus would not have noticed this distraction, but it would give him the opportunity he needed to finish Erebus off, stabbing him in the chest. In his last breath, Erebus would say, “Once again… you have proven my superior, brother… I see now… this conviction that… you spoke of… And now… you will carry on as… the better leader that… you always were…” before falling into the Cauldron, dying in the sea of oblivion.

Nyx would be outraged at this outcome (since she’d liked Erebus a bit), and Tartarus would come back to his senses, his eyes clearing up from the black fire they had once emitted. Tartarus himself would likewise be in disbelief over what he had done, but upon seeing the grieving Nyx, he’d get his wits back together and brush off any mixed feelings he had about what just happened. Like in my older posts, he’d tell Nyx that what just happened was necessary, for Erebus was but a pawn in the grand scheme of things. He’d then tell her to cease any mourning since Erebus wouldn’t want that, viewing it to be a weakness, and that such emotions do not suit her. As Tartarus would walk off, Princess Sailor Moon would just stare in silence, with a single tear in her eye (what with the spell being one-fourth weaker than before now with Erebus dead).

Back with the Sailor Team, they’d be trying to figure out what to do next, now that Usagi’s been taken from them again. Another change from my older posts would be the Space-Time Door not opening from out of nowhere with something coming out of it this time since that already happened back at the end of the Christmas two-parter. So instead, they’d be discussing what Luna overheard Tartarus say about returning to the Galaxy Cauldron. Both her and Artemis would explain that, back when they were doing research inside the Moon Castle’s library, though they didn’t find info on what they were look before back then, they did come across several other topics, including the Galaxy Cauldron. Recalling what they had read about it, they’d explain that it is the birthplace of all stars of life, located at Sagittarius Zero Star, the center of the Milky Way galaxy. Upon saying this, the words “Sagittarius Zero Star” would trigger a flash of one of Ami’s forgotten memories, recalling to her mind that Sagittarius Zero Star is indeed the location of the Imperium’s hideout. The others would ask Luna if they’d be able to go there with the power of their Sailor Crystal, but Luna would not know. But they wouldn’t get to find out due to the base detecting several beams of light shooting down and abducting people from Azabu-Juban.

In the 30th Century, future Sailor Pluto would be examining the condition of the queen and the princess, as none of their doctors could discern what it is that would ail them. Pluto would confirm that their condition is being caused by an anomaly occurring in the past, one that has tampered with the Silver Crystal of that era, causing the current state of the queen and the princess to be in a flux. If the damage to the Silver Crystal in the past isn’t corrected, there is no telling what could happen to the queen and the princess. The Sailor Quartet would want to go back in time to help with the anomaly in the past, but Pluto would stop them, telling them that this anomaly has also affected the space-time corridor between the two eras, meaning that anyone attempting to travel into the past from this era could end up erasing themselves from existence, and neither the queen nor the princess would want that. It’s best that everyone stay right where they are for now, and that their only hope is for the Sailor Senshi of the past to resolve this problem on their own.

And the rest of the episode would go back to the 20th Century and be mostly the same as in my older posts, with Nyx taking matters into her own hands, abducting people from all over Azabu-Juban, bringing them to the Moon. Instead of the people being abducted by Princess Sailor Moon, they’d be taken by Nyx, acting on her own to draw out the Sailor Senshi, carrying on Erebus’s legacy. She’d had believed that it was Princess Sailor Moon who shot Erebus instead of Typhos, which would drive her to want to kill the Sailor Senshi in Erebus’s honor. The Senshi would all head up to the Moon and fight Nyx over the many hostages she had taken, which she’d draw energy from to empower herself using the Obsidian Crystal, as an attempt to prove its might over Princess Sailor Moon and the Silver Moon Crystal that had replaced both her and the Obsidian Crystal.

Back at the Cauldron, while Princess Sailor Moon would be channeling the energy delivered from the Imperium’s external agents, Tartarus would learn of what Nyx would be up to and, as I posted before, Typhos would offer to take care of her in Tartarus’s stead.

The Sailor Senshi would still fight Nyx with little success, and Saturn would offer to use her death powers on Nyx to kill her, but would be convinced not to, and instead the four Guardian Senshi would use their Legendary Weapons in conjunction with Mamoru’s Ouryuken (instead of with Saturn’s Silence Glaive as I had originally written) to attack Nyx, doing some fair amount of damage.

Typhos would arrive, pretend to help Nyx, stab her, and declare that he killed her because “It was necessary.” (instead of the “You’re expendable,” answer I originally wrote, now having his words echo those of Tartarus). Typhos would take Nyx’s two Obsidian Rings off of her, as she’d declare her dying words of “Onore… Typhos!”

The Obsidian Crystal would be destroyed, its energy returned to the crowd of people. The Senshi would demand Typhos give back Sailor Moon, he’d chuckle, and the sky would open up to reveal a portal to the Galaxy Cauldron overhead, all according to my older posts.


Episode 50 would continue with the story of my older posts. Tartarus and PSM would arrive through the portal, PSM would use her Silver Moon Crystal to take the energy (not Chaos Energy, as written in my older posts, but normal energy) of the people and send it all up to the Cauldron, Mamoru would fight Typhos, Tartarus would fight the other Sailor Senshi, Mamoru would fight PSM, Tartarus would blast Mamoru, Usagi would snap back to her old self, and the glowing orb that came out of the Moon Castle’s Space-Time Door would strike Usagi, heal Mamoru, put all of the Sailor Senshi into a vision where it would reveal itself as Sailor Cosmos and explain its presence. And after the vision, Tartarus would have his energy and Obsidian Rings taken by Typhos, who would then don all ten Obsidian Rings and offer himself up to Chaos to become Chaos’s vessel. Chaos would accept this offer and pour his very essence into Typhos, killing Typhos and taking Typhos’s body for himself, reviving Chaos in the form of a gigantic black serpentine dragon (which, as a reminder, I chose not to name Ouroboros after all).

However, some small but detailed changes would be made to the vision Sailor Cosmos would give to the Sailor Senshi. While they would all be in their princess forms (and Mamoru in his prince form), so too would Luna and Artemis be in their human forms for this scene (much to thir own amazement).

And Sailor Cosmos would also reveal to the Senshi that the ones called Shadow Senshi originated from her future era, having been created by Sailor Chaos (revealed to be the Shadow Senshi’s boss, thus showing that, even across space and time, nearly every challenge the Sailor Senshi faced in this season all leads back Chaos), who created them as dark mockery imitations of the Sailor Senshi concept, and sent back in time to steal the Sailor Crystals of the Solar System Sailor Senshi so as to prevent the Sailor Senshi from ever winning the battle they would soon be about to fight, all to ensure a total victory for Sailor Chaos in the futue.

Sailor Cosmos would further state that, when she went back in time after the Shadow Senshi did (she wasn’t chasing after them like Shadow Moon had believed, but was instead just fleeing from her future era like in the manga), since she nearly caught up to them (this would have been after their first mission in the 30th Century), Shadow Moon attacked her, knocking her to parts unknown in the Space-Time Corridor. As such, Sailor Cosmos used what power she could to try and make contact with the 20th Century, trying to connect with the Sailor Crystals in the moments they would first reach the Sailor Senshi. Thus the premonition of the dark future that each of the Sailor Senshi witnessed upon first acquiring their Sailor Crystals was a flash of Sailor Cosmos’s own memories as her mind attempted to link up with their crystals. And when Sailor Chibi Moon and her team traveled back from the 30th Century to the 20th Century, Sailor Cosmos was able to sense their presence within the corridor and follow them towards Cosmos’s intended destination. Upon Sailor Chibi Moon and her team re-entering the door from the 20th Century to go back to their time (which was after the Christmas Eve party at Usagi’s house), Sailor Cosmos was able to finally lock on to and reach the 20th Century at last, but by which point she had used up so much of her energy that she could only materialize as a glowing orb of light. And she had been stuck on the moon ever since, desperately trying to find Sailor Moon but unable to do so having been stuck in her non-corporeal light ball form.

And another change would be that, instead of Cosmos telling the other Sailor Senshi to summon the power of their castles to summon their Sailor Crystals, she would just tell them to use their Sailor Crystals and bring them together in unity. Only when all are brought together can their light defeat the darkness. (This exact phrasing is what Gaia had said before, finally revealing to the Sailor Senshi what Gaia meant.)

And one more change would be that all the people wouldn’t be brought back to consciousness during the vision, but would be brought back later in the next episode through different means.


Episode 51 would be more of my older posts’ story. Tartarus would get back up and declare Typhos a fool for having given himself up to Chaos, for the one who would become Chaos’s vessel would surrender their very life to Chaos. That is why Sailor Moon was supposed to become the vessel. But since his master was still revived anyway, Tartarus would kneel before his master, which instead of shocking the Sailor Senshi and prompt them to ask him how he could serve a being so horrible as Chaos and get a response in the form of the Protogenoi’s backstory (as I had originally written), Tartarus’s kneeling would just disgust the Sailor Senshi, since they’d by now they’d already know his backstory.

Tartarus would offer the Sailor Senshi to Chaos, who’d respond in kind by both commending Tartarus for successfully reviving him and by blasting Tartarus to the ground. The Sailor Senshi would feel horrified by this sight, but would regain confidence when Sailor Cosmos’s voice would echo within Usagi’s mind. A slight change from my older posts would have Usagi flashback to part of the vision from last episode to get any viewers who missed last episode up to speed on Sailor Cosmos’s presence and reveal. And instead of calling upon their castles, they’d all just summon their Sailor Crystals and, remembering what Cosmos told them, would raise their ten Sailor Crystals up high and fuse them together, creating the Cosmos Crystal. It would lower to Sailor Moon, she’d activate it, and turn into Sailor Cosmos.

From here comes another change. After turning into Sailor Cosmos, she would then fly up over the fallen people and use her newfound powers to revive them. She’d then turn to face Chaos and address him, declaring that she will protect everyone from him. Amused, Chaos would test this claim by unleashing several rapid-fire blasts of dark energy is scattered directions, aiming to strike the people below Sailor Cosmos. In response to this would commence a sequence of Sailor Cosmos using a large number of individual attacks to stop each and every blast from hitting any of the people. But these wouldn’t be just any attacks, no, they would specifically be every single attack every used by the Sailor Team, from “Shabon Spray” to “Venus Love Me Chain”, “Crescent Beam” to “World Shaking”, “Mercury Aqua Rhapsody” to “Chronos Typhoon”. Virtually no Sailor Senshi attack seen prior to now would be excluded, with all of the Senshi down on the ground watching in awe as Sailor Cosmos would perform all of their attacks individually and as just one person. In the end, she’d stop every one of Chaos’s energy blasts and knock some of them back at him. Chaos would be impressed, but would be finished warming up and start to get serious. This is where the big showdown between his and Cosmos from my notes would start.

The other Senshi would protect the people from any more scattered blasts (as mentioned in my older posts), and Shingo would encourage them to keep on as Cosmos would start to waver, with everyone else rallying to cheer them on. But before they’d give the rest of their energy to Cosmos, they’d fight their way up to her as more blasts from Chaos would splatter downward as they’d make their way up to her. So instead of sending her their energy from the ground, they’d form a circle around her in the air and augment her power from there. The excess power would shoot up through Cosmos’s attack and obliterate Chaos’s dragon form, seemingly destroying him, and everyone would collapse on the ground.

Sailor Cosmos would revert back to Sailor Moon and the Cosmos Crystal would separate back into the Sailor Crystals, which would return to each of the other Senshi. Sailor Moon would be relieved at first, then catch that something’s wrong since the Cauldron’s still dark and the portal hasn’t vanished. She’d then hear Tartarus nearby, still alive, who’d tell her all that he told her in my older posts; that Chaos ain’t dead but inside the Cauldron, having merged with it, that the only way to destroy him at this point is to destroy the Cauldron, and that she’d have a choice to make. Though, he would also now tell her that, regardless of which option she’d choose, the Imperium still has other members throughout the universe, so even if Sailor Moon were to end the battle here, the war would still go on for some time. When asked by Moon why he’d tell her all this, he’d not only say that he’s grown tired of being a pawn, but also that he’s kept in mind the words Sailor Moon once said to him: “Living only to await one’s death is a sad way to live,” and for however little time he has left, he doesn’t want to live like that anymore. In his last moments, he’d say what he said of Gaia in my older posts before passing on. Sailor Moon would look on at the people and then, with renewed resolve, would fly up towards the Cauldron. The other Senshi would wake up and call out to her as she’d vanish into the Cauldron. That they’d start yelling out her real name wouldn’t matter as much now since the ten important civilian characters would have already found out her identity in previous episodes.


Episode 52 would be the long-awaited final episode, covered entirely by the last of my original posts (that is, the last one I wrote that featured ongoing story material).

Sailor Moon would enter the Galaxy Cauldron and have the big mental debate with Sailor Cosmos. After showing Cosmos all the people back in the Moon who believe in her, the scene would cut back to the Moon with Luna leading everyone (Senshi and civilians) into the Moon Castle to the Chamber of Prayer, where stood the Crystal Tower (this would be the same structure that Shadow Moon was eyeing way back in her debut episode). Luna would instruct everyone to send their hopes up to Sailor Moon via the Crystal Tower. Everyone would come together and gather their hopes together to try and send them into the Crystal Tower and up through the portal into the Galaxy Cauldron to Sailor Moon.

Their wishes and dreams would reach Sailor Moon, as would all of the Sailor Crystals. So too would more Sailor Crystals from across the universe come to reach her. She’d gather them all together and use “Silver Moon Crystal Eternal Power” to tear Chaos apart, destroying him but not 100% killing him, and sparing the Cauldron.

After this, everyone would look up to see that the Crystal Tower has ceased glowing, and the portal to the Galaxy Cauldron would be gone. What’s more is that the damage to the balcony from episode 47 would be repaired by the aftermath of the Crystal Tower’s glowing. Mamoru would have his vision conversation with Sailor Cosmos, and all the Sailor Crystals would return to their rightful owners.

Usagi would be in the bright void she ended up in, the feminine voice would ask her what she wants, Usagi would be unsure but then decide to go home, Sailor Cosmos would flash Usagi’s whole life before her eyes (though, now she’d recognize the Sailor Quartet instead of not, and she’d witness Neo Queen Serenity and Princess Small Lady waking up from their illness surrounded by everyone happy that they’re alright, along with a cameo appearance from Human form Diana) and get her out of the void. Usagi would wake up in her bed at home and be told how Sailor Cosmos fixed everything before departing (though, since the Earth isn’t drained of energy anymore, that’s something that Cosmos ex machina wouldn’t have to fix). The Tsukino house would be full of happiness and Usagi and Mamoru would share their moment on the balcony with each other.


And thus concludes the extended version of this Season 6 outline.


However…


There are still MORE forthcoming stories to be told! :circles:

That's right, it's not over yet! :sheep:

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It sounds like a great 6th season outline Sabrblade and I can't wait for the other story ideas you have!

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Next would come a movie for this season. It would be set after the season, but like the previous films, it would be a standalone story that would have little to no bearing on the season overall, and would be much more light-hearted and fun in tone compared to the more serious tone of the sixth season.

In this movie, a new band of enemies would come to Earth, arriving in (where else?) Azabu-Juban aiming to plunder it for its goods. The new enemies would be a crew of space pirates having come to Earth aboard a massive spacefaring zeppelin (you read that right, a blimp that travels though the vacuum of outer space :tongue: ) to pillage it of its booty. Leading these spacefaring scallywags would be the boisterous Captain Augustus Bloodbeard, saltiest space dog to ever sail the celestial seas.

As a character, Bloodbeard would be your stereotypical pirate captain with all the “Yo ho ho!”,“Arr!”, “Shiver me timbers!” and the like to go around. He’d come to Earth seeking more booty to pillage and plunder in his quest to find “the greatest treasure in the universe”. He’d know not what this treasure is exactly, but according to legend, those who would ever happen upon it would know the moment they found it. So he and his crew left the shores of their home planet of Barbarossa to travel the stars and seek out new worlds from which they could raid and loot for their treasure, in the hopes to one day finally find the legendary treasure they seek.

Bloodbeard would also be an interesting fellow in that, while guilty of committing several unruly acts of piracy, he would not be inherently evil. As an pirate, he’d take great pleasure in what he does, stealing treasure, raiding planets without warning, striking down those who’d oppose him and his crew, even being a chauvinist who sees females as inferior to males (which is something about him that the Sailor Senshi would strongly oppose). But underneath all his despicableness, at his core would lie a heart of gold. He’d care deeply for his crew and their loyalty, having been with them for so long that they’d have become like family to him, his first mate Mister Scabbard being like a brother to him. And he’d welcome with open arms any outsider willing to join his crew, so long as they could prove their loyalty and worth to him and the rest of the crew. What’s more is that he’d even know when to give proper respect to those who’ve earned it, as he’d eventually come to give to some of the Sailor Senshi by the movie’s conclusion, having seen just how capable and competent these “lassies” have would shown to be as people in their interactions with him and his crew. And overall, he’d just have a really jolly, happy-go-lucky personality, with a BIG happy laugh and always being very cheerful and enthusiastic even when committing the atrocities that he and his crew would traditionally commit as pirates. Though he could be irritated, confused, and disappointed, there would be very little that could upset his happy persona enough to really anger him.

Anyway, as for what would happen in this movie, Captain Bloodbeard and his pirate crew would come to Earth aboard their ship, called the Silver Seeker, and try to raid Juban, with the Sailor Senshi attempting to stop them. At first, the pirates would view the Senshi as no real threat due to their being girls, but once the Senshi would prove their might enough to drive off the crew (consisting of footsoldiers called Mateys) back to their airship, Bloodbeard and his crew would start to take them more seriously. Half of the Senshi would be able to board the ship and take the fight to the pirates, but the ship would start to pull out and leave Earth once this raid would prove to be a lost cause, with the five Sailor Senshi who got aboard (Moon, Mercury, Jupiter, Uranus, and Saturn) being captured. Bloodbeard would recognize their efforts as being brave yet foolish, but would consider himself nothing if not reasonable and, having no intention of returning to Earth anytime soon, would give the five a choice. They could either be sent to the brig as prisoners, or join the crew as new shipmates (though, with their being girls, they’ve have to either work extra hard or be given female-oriented tasks like cooking and cleaning). Seeing little choice in their options, they’d choose to join the crew for the time being, much to Bloodbeard’s delight.

The rest of the movie would focus on two fronts: One involving Rei, Minako, Michiru, Setsuna, and Mamoru trying to rescue the others, and one focusing on the five girls aboard the Silver Seeker trying to make the best of their bad situation. Over time, the five would come to impress Bloodbeard and his crew, as Makoto would prove her cooking skills over the ship’s cook, Ami would prove her seamanship smarts over most of the crew’s brightest members, Haruka would prove her swordswoman skills over the crew’s own swordplay, Hotaru would prove her politeness and propriety over the crew’s more thuggish behavior, and Usagi would prove her idealism and morality over Bloodbeard’s own sense of ethics. Thus, to the surprise of many of the crew, these five “lassies” would earn themselves a respect that the crew never thought they’d ever show to the opposite gender. Bloodbeard would even take an interest in Haruka, having never seen someone so skilled with a sword as she, possibly contemplating the idea of making her his pirate queen.

However, one crewmember would not be so keen on this change in the status quo: Bloodbeard’s first mate Mister Scabbard, who would be the most bigoted of the crew and had previously protested the idea of the captain allowing these girls to join the crew. Despite his having been the most loyal to the captain of all the crewmates, even considering the captain as his closest friend, Scabbard would view the captain’s decision to let the girls join as a mistake and would try to fix things by either getting rid of or killing the five girls so as to get things back to the way they were, rounding up any other likeminded members of the crew along the way. When the captain would discover Scabbard’s plan, Bloodbeard would view this as a mutiny and a fight would break out aboard the ship, just as the other five Senshi who weren’t captured would arrive aboard the ship to try and save the other five who were captured, culminating in a climax that would result in the ship crashing down on the surface of the moon.

After an obligatory “Sailor Senshi vs. Scabbard” final standoff, Scabbard and his men would be subdued and Bloodbeard would admit to his wrong ways of thinking about women, having had a change of heart. He woud have Scabbard and those who sided with him tossed into the brig to await their forthcoming punishment (they’d be swabbing the decks for a looooong time). Bloodbeard would thank the Senshi for both their helping to stop the mutiny and their helping him and his crew to reevaluate themselves as pirates and people. Thus, he would let the five who joined his crew go free (even Haruka, having given up his idea of making her his queen). Before departing, the girls would ask Bloodbeard if he still intends to search for the treasure he seeks and plunder other worlds in the process, to which Bloodbeard would say that he’ll never stop searching for the legendary treasure, and that one cannot change the nature of a pirate so easily. However, that doesn’t mean he and his crew can’t can never change. “Never say never, lassies!” As his ship would take off, he’d call out to the Senshi to reassure them that he’ll at least do them the courtesy of leaving their planet alone, giving his word as a captain, and holler a rousing farewell. After the Silver Seeker would leave, the Senshi would all be left on the moon to wonder if they could really trust that pirate’s word and if there’s any hope for them to change, to which Moon and Uranus (having formed an understanding with Bloodbeard the most) would say that they think they can. “Never say never.”



And then there’s more to come!


After all this would come a series of ten OVAs set after season 6 during Usagi’s second year of high school (Grade 11). Each one would focus on one of the Solar System Sailor Senshi, exploring more of their being princesses with castles of their own, and even going into how each of the princesses first became Sailor Senshi back in the distant past. Though, each of these OVAs would still be set in the present, with the historical parts being shown in flashbacks, and with each plot involving all of the non-Moon Sailor Senshi each getting their own Planetary Stick item to go with their Sailor Crystals, much like how Usagi’s old Moon Stick went with her Silver Crystal (i.e. – Ami would get the Mercury Stick, Rei would get the Mars Stick, etc.). And most (but not all) of these OVAs would involve a (present-day) villain who would be a remnant of the Primordial Imperium (recall how Tartarus said they still had additional forces scattered among the stars).


The first OVA would focus on Ami and her Mariner Castle. Ryo Urawa would be brought back into the story and the villain of this story would be an enemy of the planet Mercury.


The second OVA would focus on Minako and her Magellan Castle. Remember how her first visit to her castle ended with the fate of Ace being left completely ambiguous as to whether or not he made it through the portal to Earth? Well, this OVA would reveal that he did! When he came through, he saw that Sailor Venus had more allies in this world and decided to make himself scarce upon his exiting the portal. Since his arrival, he decided make a name for himself so as to impress Venus and win her back. Thus, he became adopted the human alias of “Ace Saijyo” and managed to become an actor, becoming famous for his TV role as the hero character “Kaitou Ace”. Once he’d have a successful life of his own on Earth, he’d then seek out Minako to try and once again make him his. But would Minako accept him or reject him? And is he good or bad now? And how would he feel about Minako putting her duty to Usagi above all else? Those are the nagging questions. ;)


The third OVA would focus on Rei and her Phobos Deimos Castle. This OVA would also serve to resolve the shaky relationship between her and Yuichiro, putting her in a situation where she’d have to decide once and for all if she truly does like Yuichiro and wants to reciprocate his feelings for her, or not.


The fourth OVA would focus on Makoto and her Io Castle. I haven’t really thought much of this one yet.


The fifth OVA would focus on Hotaru and her Titan Castle. Again, this one’s plot is TBA.


The sixth OVA would focus on Haruka and her Miranda Castle. Again, TBA.


The seventh OVA would focus on Michiru and her Triton Castle. TBA.


The eighth OVA would focus on Setsuna and her Charon Castle. TBA.


The ninth OVA would be the only one of the ten that would deviate entirely from this formula, instead telling the story of the Shadow Senshi’s creation by Sailor Chaos and their first mission to kidnap and hold Chibiusa to ransom for the Sailor Crystals. We’d also get a glimpse of Sailor Cosmos fleeing from her future and being attacked by Shadow Moon after the Shadow Senshi would escape from the 30th Century. Those familiar with the DBZ special “History of Trunks”, this would be kinda similar to that kind of special in concept, showing the playing out of events that we were only shown brief glimpses of before. Though, to keep this OVA somewhat consistent with the others, it’d be billed as a Chibiusa-focused story and include a fair amount of focus on her and the Crystal Palace of Crystal Tokyo, with the Cosmos future era scenes serving only as bookending material for the main “Chibiusa vs. the Shadow Senshi” story set in the 30th Century.


The tenth and final OVA would focus on Usagi and Mamoru, but instead of exploring the Moon Castle or whatever castle Mamoru had in the past, this OVA would instead be the culmination of a side plot that would have formed together piece by piece within all of the first eight OVAs. Amid each of those OVAs’ main events, a secret group would have been observing the actions of the Sailor Senshi from behind the scenes, and would partially bring itself to light in this one in an attempt to silence Sailor Moon once and for all, trying to get her out of the away for some bigger plan of theirs to arise. Though this attempt to eliminate Sailor Moon would be thwarted, this enemy faction would retreat to go into hiding, opting to instead lay low and continue to observe Sailor Moon from afar and continue to try to keep her existence a secret from any unwanted parties. For now.



And that’s still not all!


After this would come another movie! A Sailor Stars movie! Yup, a movie for Sailor Stars that would have a time skip placing it some years after that season. The movie would be set after Usagi would finally graduate high school (meaning that Usagi went her entire Grade 12 year of high school in peace), and would deal with the long-awaited wedding of Usagi and Mamoru. Unlike in the manga, Crystal Tokyo would not yet be underway, so this would still be set in the contemporary 20th Century. And after trying to come up with the right villain who would want to try and interfere with this wedding, I can think of none more perfect for the job than a resurrected Queen Beryl. I’m also thinking of having Sailor Heavy Metal Papillon and a revived Jadeite in this one as well, since Papillon never got to appear in the Sailor Stars anime and Jadeite is the easiest one of the Shitennou whose demise could be undone (and, well, he’s the one king who most needed more fleshing out since the anime didn’t really do anything with him beyond his being a generic bad guy). Papillon, however, I’m considering having her not be a villain in this but instead be something of a victim.

Though, since this would be a Sailor Stars movie, even though it would be set all this time after that season (allowing the sixth season and everything that came after it before this movie’s placement to come before this movie), it would be made as though it came out before all of the season 6 stuff and the OVAs, meaning that it would be a self-contained story with very little ties to anything after Sailor Stars. So, Mamoru would not turn into his Golden Knight form in this movie, instead using only his Tuxedo Mask ans Prince Endymion forms. And none of the Guardian Senshi would wield their Legendary Weapons either. BUT, some things would still be present, such as the non-Moon Sailor Senshi all having their Eternal forms from Season 6 and Planetary Sticks from the OVAs, and Mamoru would be able to use “Tuxedo La Smoking Bomber”, with the excuse of their being here being that some things like the Eternal forms would be based more on the manga than the anime, while the other things would all be all ideas first shown in this movie, and that Season 6 and the OVAs would take inspiration from this movie to work them into the story retroactively. Got it? No? Good! :P

Though, I haven’t fully figured out how this movie’s story would play out. Just some bits and pieces of ideas, but nothing thorough as of yet. Mostly that Beryl would set up a new base inside Tokyo Tower and try to take Mamoru for her once again, but this time he’d have his own powers to block any spell Beryl would try to brainwash him with, so he’d only pretend to be brainwashed so as to catch Beryl off guard and find out the full extent of her plans. And that Beryl would be defeated by all ten Senshi using their crystals together with their Planetary Sticks to finish her off once and for all. But other than that, not much else of the plot has been laid out. So, let’s move on.



And so with the marriage of Usagi and Mamoru covered, one would think that would be the end of it, right? Nope!



Enter my idea for a Season 7! (Maria, if you’re reading this, I’ve made several changes since I last told ya about this idea.)

As this would take place after the time skip that got the characters out of high school (save for Hotaru), Usagi and Mamoru would already be married, but it would be before Crystal Tokyo happens (since the anime didn't have Crystal Tokyo already starting by the time of their wedding like in the manga, this would be a pre-Crystal Tokyo season). Thus, Usagi would already be living a post-high school life as Mamoru's housewife (by which point, she would have gotten better at being a homemaker, able to actually clean and cook some things by herself without always messing things up -- but she'd still show signs of needing to improve some more. She'd be a more able housewife than when we last saw her, but still not perfect).

For this season, four new factions would come into play here, with one of them having some influence in the Japanese government to keep all public awareness of the Sailor Senshi and their enemies as low profile as possible, in order to keep one of the other factions from learning about the Senshi.

The four new factions would have originally all been one. Remember how in episode 44 of the anime we saw a ton of other bubbles being sent to Earth besides just the Senshi and Endymion? The people of the four factions would all be people reborn from those bubbles (or at least, the founding members of the original single faction would, other members who would have joined could be regular people invited to join their cause).

The original single faction would have been a Secret Society of people reborn from both the Moon Kingdom and the fallen Earth Kingdom. I’m considering referring to this original group as the Silver Society. However, disagreements among the members would eventually lead to the society splitting into the four present day factions, each with different agendas and ideals. By the present day, the four factions would each be comprised of some very wealthy and influential people, like politicians, businessmen/businesswomen, police officers, scholars, scientists, physicists, diplomats, aristocrats, philanthropists, and more. Some of which might include several of the more wealthy Victims of the Day from past episodes like Princess Dia, Edwards, Mr. Garajan, Countess Rose, Princess Rubina, Sergei Asimov, etc.

The first faction would be the one that the government-influencing faction doesn't want finding out about the Senshi. But, this faction does wind up learning about the Senshi and becomes a powerful ally to them. This faction is in favor of restoring the Moon Princess to power and, upon finally meeting Usagi, wants to help her do so in any way they can. They have been looking for the Moon Princess for a time, and the reason they didn't find her until now is that they believed that the Moon Princess would reveal herself at the right time, and so waited patiently until that time would come, keeping their eyes out for when she would show herself. For those familiar with Avatar: The Last Airbender and The Legend of Korra, they’d kinda be like how the Order of the White Lotus was to Korra when they helped raise her as the Avatar. This group would likewise want to help prepare Usagi for her future reign as queen.

The second of the four new factions would also be in favor of the Moon Princess coming back to power; however, their methods in finding the princess differed from the first group. Whereas the first group relied on faith and patience for the Moon Princess to show herself, this group grew impatient and decided to use scientific and mathematical methods to find her. And their methods did bear fruit... almost. They unknowingly made a tiny mistake in their calculations, in which they did narrow down the exact date and location of when the reincarnated Moon Princess would be born, BUT they found the wrong girl. Another baby girl was born on the same day and in the same hospital as Usagi, and so this girl is whom they believe to be the Moon Princess, and thus would have (with permission from her parents, whom they've invited into their group) been raising this girl from infancy to be a princess, not knowing that she's the wrong girl. And because of their influence, this girl is also convinced herself that she's the Moon Princess, not knowing that she's really a fake. I’m considering calling the real name of this girl (I say “real name” since “Princess Serenity” isn’t the name she was born with) by the name of “Hikari Tsukino”, as a pun on “Tsuki no hikari” (“Light of the Moon”) and to further the confusion of this faction thinking she’s the Moon Princess by having her have the same surname as Usagi, even though she was born to a different Tsukino family.

But when word gets out of the first faction discovering Usagi, tensions would arise and lead to this faction becoming an opponent of both the Sailor Senshi and the first faction, with the leader of this second faction so insistent that Hikari is the true princess rather than Usagi, absolutely refusing to believe otherwise (but when the False Moon Princess Hikari eventually comes to know the truth, I'd allow at least her to be redeemed in the end so that she doesn't fully stay as a rival to Usagi).

The third faction would be the one with the government influence that was trying to keep Sailor Moon’s existence under wraps. Recall how there was a group of people who tried to eliminate Sailor Mon back during the OVA series. That group would be revealed to be a subsidiary of this faction. This faction (headed by Rei’s father!) would not be in favor of restoring the Moon Princess to power, but would instead have fallen out of favoring that idea, preferring instead to let humanity continue on its natural course without being dominated by a single ruler. This faction would be of the mind that no one person (especially one that this faction would view as an extraterrestrial and not a true Earthling) should ever control the whole world, and has been trying to keep Sailor Moon and all acivities related to her covered up and under the radar so as to not let the first faction catch wind of her existence. Thus, it would be revealed that this faction is the reason why there has been so little media coverage of the Sailor Senshi’s activities and why the Senshi have only remained the stuff of urban legend. They covered up the notice of the sky being darkened by Metalia as being “unusual weather conditions”. They covered up the giant Jakokusuishou appearing in Tokyo as being “a convoluted terrorist plot that was thwarted”. They covered up the destruction of the Mugen Academy as being “a freak accident”. They covered up Nehellenia’s tent invasion as being “an elaborately performed hoax”. And they covered up Sailor Galaxia’s mass Star Seed snatching as “a widespread hallucinogenic terrorist attack”. The one thing they couldn’t cover up, however, was the mass amounts of people being taken up to the Moon, on which stood a kingdom. This in particular created great problems for them, as the incident helped to play a role in the first faction’s finding Usagi.

Originally, I was going to have the third faction instead be in favor of restoring a former member of royalty to power like the first two, but NOT the Moon Princess. Instead, these people were gonna be in favor of Prince Endymion becoming the ruler of the Earth, as was his original right, with this faction believing that the power that dominated the Moon should never dominate the Earth. But since Mamoru would already be married to Usagi by this point, he would disagree with those who wanted only him to rule without Usagi. But in the end, I decided to scrap this idea in favor of the above one since the idea of them favoring Mamoru over Usagi would have just made them feel like a redux of the Dark Kingdom, and I didn’t want that.

Anyway, the fourth faction would be the main antagonist group of the series with the Monsters of the Day. Like the others, this group is also trying to bring back a past ruler, but an evil one. One that predates even the Golden Kingdom's existence. The original ruler of the Earth. Thus, this group's master has the biggest backstory.

In ancient times, the dinosaurs roamed the Earth, but not entirely how humanity believes. While some of them were how present day humans imagined them (of which Kirin and his mother from episode 67 would be related to), there also existed ones of a much higher evolutionary form. These ones were sentient and tyrannical, ruled by a mighty king who fancied himself a superior being above all others. A vicious tyrant among monsters. He and his higher-evolved subjects resided in a world within the Earth that would later become Elysion, leaving the surface world of the Earth to be inhabited by the lesser-evolved dinosaurs that present day humans are more familiar with.

When the early members of humanity first came upon pre-Elysion, the reptilian ruler viewed them as inferior beings and enslaved them for his own gain and amusement. Finally fed up with their cruel masters, the primitive humans attempted a rebellion and, eventually, defeated the saurian creatures and sealed away the tyrant, who was too powerful for them to kill outright. The ones responsible for defeating the evil king were five men who had used the power of a sacred stone to seal the king away. That stone would later be revealed to have been the Golden Crystal. The leader of these five men would become the first king of the Golden Kingdom, and the other four would be the original Shitennou, making Mamoru, Jadeite, Nephrite, Zoisite, and Kunzite all part of a lengthy dynasty that extends quite a way's back (this season 7 would have Mamoru learn that the Shitennou used to be his knights, since the first season of the anime never touched upon that).

When the tyrant was sealed away, he was imprisoned within a relic that served as his sarcophagus. Closer to the present day, an archeologist team working for the company headed by a member of the original Silver Society would unearth this relic on a dig. The relic would eventually wind up in the possession of the company’s head, who would end up awakening the tyrant from his slumber while still sealed inside the relic. Promising the man power beyond imagination, the king would request that he'd be freed from his prison from which he could not escape. Thus, this man would become the tyrant’s herald, devoted to bringing back the "original ruler of the Earth", whom he’d believe would have more right to rule the Earth than either the Moon Princess or the Earth Prince ever do. And what this faction would seek would be a source of power great enough to free its master, be it the Silver Crystal, the Golden Crystal, both, or otherwise. And when he'd finally be set free by the season's end, the king would assume the form of a large kaiju-like creature as tall as a building (I got this idea from someone on this board once asking something like "What if the Senshi fought a kaiju like Godzilla or something?").

As this faction would be the ones with the MotDs, all of the monsters of this season would be reptilian and saurian in appearance. I’m thinking of just simply calling them “Saurians”. And as a twist on the standard MotD fight setup, each fight would have the monsters able to undergo their own kind of transformation. They would "evolve", so to speak, into a slightly bigger, more powerful form, requiring the Senshi to power up each time a monster does so. And thus, the way the Senshi would transform this season would have a greater variety to it. For starters, by this point in time, the Senshi would be able to transform into their pre-Super Forms as a base, and then willingly access their Super Forms, and then their Eternal Forms, whenever they'd need them, allowing them to go back and forth between whichever of the three forms they'd want to use. This would also explain why the Guardian Senshi are in their pre-Super Forms in Crystal Tokyo as seen in R. (They'd be in those lower forms due to their having already channeled their Super and Eternal powers into the force field, including the powers that would allow them to assume those higher forms.)

Usagi would also still be able to access the Princess Sailor Moon form that she got from the Primordial Imperium back in Season 6 and use its powers for good. But, as a form more powerful than her Eternal form, and once a form used for bad purposes, it would start off as a form difficult to control, with Usagi having to train throughout this season to, by the season's last quarter, get the hang of this form and fully master it as a force for good.

I've also considered other ideas for this season, like having the second faction constantly trying to get Mamoru to join them since they'd want him to get together with their false princess (despite his already being married to Usagi, whom they view as a intruder upon their plans), or possibly bringing in a character based on Tartarus from the sixth season but named "Titus" and as a good guy this time (he'd be like a general who would help train the Senshi and Mamoru to help them get better at physical combat), or possibly bringing back some old characters like Ryo again or even Kirin (since the enemies of the season would be of his original race).

Another idea I definitely want to put into this season is having the field commander of the villain faction being a Saurian named Brutus, who would work with the Saurian king’s herald in their mission to free their master.

And another idea I want to put in this season would be to have one of the Saurian MotDs question the ideals of his evil masters and decide that he doesn't want to be evil and actually join the Sailor Senshi as an ally (with him being a lizard-based creature, he'd be the first non-humanlike ally of the Senshi who could actually help them on the battlefield, as well as being their second truly male combatant ally after Mamoru). This good Saurian’s name would be Hyperion.

And for the climax of the seventh season's third arc (out of four), the Saurian faction would succeed in summoning a creature that would serve as a harbinger for the Saurian king’s own forthcoming appearance. This creature would be a gigantic, dark gold-colored griffin that would emerge from atop a massive platform formed from the earth that would rise up from the sea floor of Tokyo Bay. The griffin and its platform would be rendered in CGI similar to that seen in the R movie, and after it would be summoned, the griffin would take off and start destroying everything in sight (firing blasts and beams of energy from its mouth) to prepare for the return of the king. This would be the Sailor Senshi’s biggest battle in the season before the final battle, and would be the point in the season where Usagi would at long last succeed at mastering the power of her Princess Sailor Moon form, which she would have no choice but to use in order to destroy the griffin monster.

And when the king would finally be freed for the final battle near the end of the season, he would first appear as a harmless-looking humanoid figure (kinda resembling the Lizard from The Amazing Spider-Man movie), but would prove to be immensely powerful and formidable in his own right. And like the others of his kind, he would be able to evolve into a bigger, more terrifying form. Though, unlike the others, he would have the ability to evolve twice, with his final form being the aforementioned giant-sized kaiju form he’d have. It would take the combined powers of Princess Sailor Moon, the Golden Knight, all the Eternal Sailor Senshi (having acquired wings like Usagi), and Hyperion in his own evolved form to defeat the king.

And there's one idea I have either for the man who led the fourth faction as the main villain’s herald, or for the man in charge of the second faction who was determined to discredit Usagi and pass off Hikari as the true Moon Princess, but I haven't decided which man to use for this idea since both men would be quite power-hungry throughout the season. Plus, this idea is so spoilerific for something at the end of the season that I just have to use spoiler tags for what I'm about to say (even though the story isn't even written yet :googly: ).

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At the very end of the series, when the final enemy is finally defeated, all would seem fine and well with the Senshi and all their allies relieved that the battle is over. As such, they would all be very fatigued from fighting such an epic battle. But, one of the two men I mentioned before would still be alive and still be power-hungry. Seizing the opportunity while the Senshi are all exhausted, he would grab hold of the Silver Crystal with his bare hands and attempt to use its power for his own selfishness, beckoning it to grant him the power that he so fervently desires. However, while the Silver Crystal would grant his wish in a way, because it was used by tainted, unworthy hands, it would not properly work for him the way he intended it to. Though this man would get what he asked for, it would come at a price of a curse placed upon him by the Silver Crystal, as it would physically disfiguring him, mutating his hands and carving a mark into the forehead of his skull as punishment for his misuse of the crystal.

Not only that, but because this corrupt man tried to use the Silver Crystal's power for evil, the result would conjure up a storm that would ultimately bring about the global freezing that occurs prior to Crystal Tokyo, for such use of the crystal by a wicked soul would result in disaster and misfortune (even for its wielder), while proper use of the crystal in its rightful hands (i.e. - the Moon Matriarchy) would result miracles and good fortune.

Later, after the world had fallen to sleep until it was awoken by Neo-Queen Serenity (whom Usagi had been trying to become all season) in the 30th Century, this man would also be awakened and come to hate the Silver Crystal for what it did to him, believing it to be a force of pure evil that must be removed from this world. He would at first be appalled by what the Silver Crystal did to him, hating his new misshapen appearance. But then his mindset would change, instead embracing his hideousness as being what is right, believing that he is right and everyone else is wrong. His disfigured form would be so grotesque as to resemble Death itself, and thus this man, having become so twisted as to view himself and only himself as being in the right, would view himself as Death incarnate, and that the only true and right path in this world is Death itself. Therefore, to him, all life in the universe would be deemed an abomination that must be cleansed by the purity of darkness, with this man as its ruler.

To start his anti-life campaign, he would instigate an attack on Crystal Tokyo in its early days, rallying allies to his cause and leading the charge, aiming to destroy the Silver Crystal and all life on the planet. Though some of his evil allies would be purified by Neo Queen Serenity and King Endymion, he and the rest would all flee to Planet Nemesis in their moment of defeat, where this man would plot his revenge upon Crystal Tokyo, realizing that he was too rash and reckless in trying a direct attack to destroy the Earth, and instead would decide to calmly plan his next attack overtime. Assuming a new identity, he would eventually come to influence the descendants of those who fled to Nemesis with him to form the Black Moon Clan. The mark carved into his skull, once meant to demonize the man, would now be the symbol under which the Black Moon Clan would fly their flag.

That's right, this is an origin story for the Anime version of Wiseman/Death Phantom.




Aaaaaaaaaaaand that’s it! That’s all I’ve got. As it presently looks like I won’t be putting anything into a proper fanfic form, this lengthy overview covers just about everything I’ve thought up to this point. Any other ideas would be ones to come later on. Till then, that's all folks. :wave:

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Sabr, word of advice, put that stuff in a spoiler or something. I barely got what it was about!

Um... We got someone, Shingo I think, on trial for murdering Mamoru... And his defense attorney is...

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Really? Kristoph Gavin? Calling it now, he killed Mamoru. Then he poisons Usagi because she gets a little too close to the truth. Repeat with Chibi-Usa.


Funny... Actually, no, scratch that, terrifying how a man with no relation to Chaos... Heck, no evil powers of any sort, just his own twisted mind and knowledge of the legal system, could be more of a threat to the Senshi than someone like Queen Beryl.


I think I've got it, right Sabrblade?

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I think I've got it, right Sabrblade?
Go back one page to where I explain my intentions to expand upon the story I previously wrote on the first two pages of this topic.

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Sabrblade wrote:
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I think I've got it, right Sabrblade?
Go back one page to where I explain my intentions to expand upon the story I previously wrote on the first two pages of this topic.


Yeah, not gonna lie, the size of what you wrote's a bit intimidating...

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Princess Venus wrote:
Sabrblade wrote:
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I think I've got it, right Sabrblade?
Go back one page to where I explain my intentions to expand upon the story I previously wrote on the first two pages of this topic.


Yeah, not gonna lie, the size of what you wrote's a bit intimidating...
Yer no fun. :tongue:

Took me months to type it all. 70 pages in MS Word, no less. ^_^'

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Sabrblade I have read some of what you wrote on the other seasons and will write more when I have read them all. However I love your depiction of the romance between Ace and Minako and Rei and Yuuichirou. I sincerely hope these couples get together in the end. After all they are great together especially Rei and Yuuichirou and I think that some of the other Senshi deserve love as well besides the canon couples of Usagi and Mamoru as well as Haruka and Michiru. Oh and I also hope Ami gets with Ryo as they are one of my favorite pairings as well.

Ok I have read your posts in depth and I love all of it. I absolutely adore the OVAs and I also love the 7th season and the movies. One thing I think will be interesting since Rei's Father Takashi is kind of a bad guy is when Rei finally confronts him as a Senshi and whether he will die or not. I think that this could be very dramatic. I am also intrigued by Hikari and how you intend to show her as a character. Also since she is a false Moon Princess will she somewhat resemble Usagi?

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There were two more ideas I forgot to put into the Season 7 part of my last big post, and have just now gone and edited them into it.

They are last two paragraphs before the last one to come before the spoiler-tagged section. These two:
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And for the climax of the seventh season's third arc (out of four), the Saurian faction would succeed in summoning a creature that would serve as a harbinger for the Saurian king’s own forthcoming appearance. This creature would be a gigantic, dark gold-colored griffin that would emerge from atop a massive platform formed from the earth that would rise up from the sea floor of Tokyo Bay. The griffin and its platform would be rendered in CGI similar to that seen in the R movie, and after it would be summoned, the griffin would take off and start destroying everything in sight (firing blasts and beams of energy from its mouth) to prepare for the return of the king. This would be the Sailor Senshi’s biggest battle in the season before the final battle, and would be the point in the season where Usagi would at long last succeed at mastering the power of her Princess Sailor Moon form, which she would have no choice but to use in order to destroy the griffin monster.

And when the king would finally be freed for the final battle near the end of the season, he would first appear as a harmless-looking humanoid figure (kinda resembling the Lizard from The Amazing Spider-Man movie), but would prove to be immensely powerful and formidable in his own right. And like the others of his kind, he would be able to evolve into a bigger, more terrifying form. Though, unlike the others, he would have the ability to evolve twice, with his final form being the aforementioned giant-sized kaiju form he’d have. It would take the combined powers of Princess Sailor Moon, the Golden Knight, all the Eternal Sailor Senshi (having acquired wings like Usagi), and Hyperion in his own evolved form to defeat the king.

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 Post subject: Re: Fanfiction Ideas
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Just read through the whole thing!

I really like how your Season 6 mixes elements between all continuities. As a suggestion for the Golden Knight, maybe just have him say "Golden Crystal Power." In PGSM, even though it was a parody, they had Mamoru shout "Tuxedo Power" without the 'make up.' Also, perhaps instead of a 'Golden Pen' - just to distinguish him from the Senshi a bit, you could give him an item similar to his watch in the manga?

I think I kind of prefer keeping Gaia a bit of a mystery like in your original write-up, but I think it's cool regardless.

The one constructive criticism I would offer is that I think some of the 'filler episode' plots in the beginning could use some fresh ideas. Obviously, you're still working on this - but I think the anime was victim of reusing the same concepts over and over. For example, I think the Usagi is jealous of Mamoru angle has has gotten so much mileage already, that it's not worth exploring again. The Ex-girlfriend (is she Hina?) plot sounds very similar to one of the filler episodes in SuperS. I also personally think that with the Anime introducing a thousand side characters, while introducing manga only characters is a neat concept, I would personally prefer to see the dynamics of the Senshi's relationships explored more. However, it's your fanfic and I know part of the reason why you're introducing these characters is to use as victims of the day.

With that said, I think your last arc sounds very strong as a concept. I think using two parters is a great idea because it's a good way to keep the story fresh. I just rewatched PGSM and it did a similar thing which was what kept the viewers interested.

I am very intrigued by your Season 7 though. I had the idea of a sequel to the anime or manga where the Sailor Guardians faced off against the 'Dark Government' but ultimately dropped in favor of writing a second season of PGSM set nine years after the Special Act and adapting the Infinity arc. I love the idea of the Saurians because it's very Super Sentai.

For the Sailor Stars movie, I had a similar idea, but it was supposed to focus on human Artemis and his (and Luna's) home planet Mau - kind of like how the S movie focused on human Luna. Since you're drawing on PGSM ideas, perhaps reintroduce Mio Kuroki? P-:


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Just like most of the fans, I wrote a fanfiction too, between 2006 and 2007. It was like a 6th series, and it followed the formula of the original anime, with some serious differences of course. =) For example, some of the random victims actually died, so the minions not always failed their missions. The new enemy was a bunch of guys from different ages, like roman centurion, spanish inquisitor, british headhunter, german commando, rebellious russian general from the future, who sold their souls to an ancient, timeless evil, who want to collect enough innocent souls to awake the chaos. Of course, they summoned demons first, like in the original series. The difference was, when they fight against the senshis, and before summoned a demon, they teleported them into their own dimension, and the senshis only can escape from there, if they successfully killed the demon. Because demons can only exist in there, and they existance kept up that dimension. These dimensions and demons of course are mirrored the minions historical age, and his or her personality.

Of course, after 8 years, it sounds simple and clichéd, but back then, I did my best. :smug:

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Alrighty, finally got some time to respond to the feedback I've gotten so far.

MariaTenebre wrote:
Honestly the only thing I think that dosen't make any sense and it really is only one thing is why Sailor Moon would feel any guilt for killing Kerberos after all he was quite evil and richly deserved his end. While I don't think that Sailor Moon likes to kill anyone I can't see her feeling any more guilty at killing Kerberos then say Beryl.
It's not that she feels guilty over specifically killing him, but in the method of how he died. His death was an accident, she didn't mean to literally stab him in the back, so the fact that that's what ended up happening shook her quite a bit. Not to mention that he, in his last moments, took advantage of Usagi's shock by calling her out of the atrocity of stabbing him in the back. As she was already shook up by the event, his words added enough insult to injury to really affect her and mess her up even more.

Her guilt over how he died also stems from the longstanding feelings rooted in traditional Japanese Bushido, in which actions of underhandedness (like stabbing an opponent in the back) are looked down upon as disgraceful and immoral. Though Usagi isn't exactly the ideal representation of one who openly practices Bushido, she displays inherent traits of the code in her behavior and ideals as an ally of justice and honor. So not only did the accidental stabbing shock her on a mental level but on an moral level as well. Plus, Kerberos's verbal attack on her honor in his final moments further hit home in her moment of vulnerability.

What's worse is how future events played out after she got back to Earth. Sonoko and other students blamed Sailor Moon for the deaths of those whose energies were taken by Erebus since Sailor Moon wasn't able to save them. And then Typhos got struck down by Chaos when he pulled Sailor Moon out of Chaos's grasp, which to Sailor Moon look as though Chaos had just killed Typhos because of his saving her. Thus, there is a long trail of people either being killed or not being saved from death that all connected to Sailor Moon. To Usagi, they all died (or "seemingly died" in Typhos's case) either directly or indirectly because of Sailor Moon, and she was fed up with all the deaths that were happening because of her.

Plus, despite all the wickedness that Kerberos embodied, I like to think that, somewhere in the very back of her head, Usagi still hoped that she could "save" Kerberos as she had done for both Queen Nehellenia and Sailor Galaxia, wanting to believe that there was still some shred of "humanity" (for lack of a better term) in him. After all, despite his being the enemy, the guy did restore the Tankei Kingdom in its time of great need, and brought about an era of prosperity and progress for the kingdom. Why would an inherently evil person go to so much trouble to aid in the restoration of a fallen civilization and make it be better off than it ever was before? Sure, it all could have been part of an elaborate scheme of deception, but to Usagi, it wouldn't make sense for someone who didn't have any goodness left in him to bother with as much effort as Kerberos put into his winning over the people's good graces. So she wanted to believe that Kerberos wasn't 100% evil, even despite his becoming more and more villainous the more she got to know him better. Usagi's just the kind of person who wants to believe in people, which is a concept that is a heavy part of this series.

As for the Beryl comparison, though Beryl had committed plenty of atrocities, Usagi had never returned the favor to Beryl. Usagi met Beryl's dishonorable actions with just and righteous actions. The final battle against Super Beryl had Usagi kill Beryl in an honorable one-on-one duel in which Usagi simply overpowered Beryl's attack and took her out face forward without any underhanded means. No deception, no trickery, no cheap shots, no back-stabbing, none of that. Beryl's death at Usagi's hands was handled with decency and justice, whereas Kerberos's death involved an (accidental) act of underhandedness that left Usagi feeling scarred mentally, emotionally, and ethically.

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One question though are the Shadow Senshi Sailor Senshi as well just evil one's serving Chaos.
No, they are evil beings created by him, whose nature as such shows some irony in their being lliving creations made by a force of death and destruction.

Though, I am a bit saddened that no one's yet caught what they are a reference to (beyond the obvious "Evil Sailor Senshi counterpart team" reference). ;)

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However I love your depiction of the romance between Ace and Minako and Rei and Yuuichirou. I sincerely hope these couples get together in the end.
Well, the thing about Ace is that even I am not sure what his endgame is. We know he's madly in love with Venus and wants her all to himself, but is it genuine love or just raw selfish lust? And if it's the latter, could he learn to ever truly love her for real? And what of Venus? Could she ever return his feelings after what he tried to do to her back in her castle? I mean, the guy tried to force her to stay with him and abandon her home and loved ones, all because they meant nothing to him since he was so focused on just his own personal wants and desires, not caring about Venus's own feelings. So if Ace really is to win back Venus and not remain as an antagonist in her eyes, he'd have a long way to go in order to change his ways.

So right now, I've got nothing for how he'd end up, but we'll see what, if anything, happens with him down the line.

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One thing I think will be interesting since Rei's Father Takashi is kind of a bad guy is when Rei finally confronts him as a Senshi and whether he will die or not. I think that this could be very dramatic.
About this, I can say that I definitely don't want her father to die, so I'd probably just have him either redeemed or just defeated without being killed (like "arrested" or something).

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I am also intrigued by Hikari and how you intend to show her as a character. Also since she is a false Moon Princess will she somewhat resemble Usagi?
I haven't yet thought too much about her character, aside from the basic aspect of her being in love with Endymion (despite his already being married) before having even met him, but a lot of her personality would at first be based on how the people of her faction raised her to behave, as in how they idealistically believed the Moon Princess behaved. So she probably would at first be like the stereotypical "royal princess" character type before being able have more of a thorough personality fleshed out over time as she'd gradually come to learn the truth of her whole life having been a lie.

As for her physically resembling Usagi, I will admit that I did consider that, but I then felt that having her look too much like Usagi would be a bit too much on the nose, and decided that any physical similarities between the two would only be rudimentary or coincidental. Though, I did at least imagine her with long black or dark blue-violet hair.



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As a suggestion for the Golden Knight, maybe just have him say "Golden Crystal Power." In PGSM, even though it was a parody, they had Mamoru shout "Tuxedo Power" without the 'make up.'
I hear you, but, thing is, I always liked how the "Make Up!" part added an extra sense of determination and energy to the "XYZ Power, Make Up!" transformation calls of the girls, as though the "XYZ Power" part was the name of the power they're using and the "Make Up!" part was the decisive command to activate said power. It just just has that extra feel to it, you know? So I want Mamoru to have his own command phrase too.

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Also, perhaps instead of a 'Golden Pen' - just to distinguish him from the Senshi a bit, you could give him an item similar to his watch in the manga?
I kinda like the pen idea more for two reasons. The first being that it helps make him feel more like he's a part of the team instead of being their "Extra Hero" that he always felt like as Tuxedo Mask. I wanted to help making him feel more integrated into the team by having him share something similar to the rest of them, any giving him a pen of his own felt like a step in that direction.

The other reason is a more personal reason: I kinda already penciled a sketch of what his pen looks like. ^_^' (it looks more like a real pen with a scaled down replica of the Golden Crystal on its top, instead of resembling the more rod-like pens the girls had back in the Dark Kingdom era)

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I think I kind of prefer keeping Gaia a bit of a mystery like in your original write-up, but I think it's cool regardless.
I can see that, yeah. But as I was looking back over my original write-up, I felt that I didn't like how Gaia seemed forced in at the last second so close to the end of the story when Sailor Cosmos was soon to just as swiftly inserted moments later. It felt to me like I was putting too many new elements into the finale all at once, and Gaia felt like the one element that not only mattered the least in grand scheme of the finale, but also felt like I should have mentioned her sooner. That's also how I felt about the Imperium's backstory as a whole, as it didn't get explained until near the very end in my original write-up, so I felt that I owed it to the readers to have their backstory explained earlier in the story than it originally was.

As for Gaia herself, I didn't like how I introduced this seemingly important player in the backstory and ultimately left her as a non-entity in the bigger picture. After all, her role was key starting the Sailor Wars in the backstory, so I didn't really like her being left as just a forgettable footnote in my original write-up. So I had her be the one to give the backstory in the new version sooner than when I had Tartarus be the one to do so in the original version.

I understand the idea of having her be kept more mysterious, but aside from her actually getting to speak with the Senshi and offer them a clue to defeating Chaos, there isn't much else about her that wasn't already told in the original version. We just now get a scene with her speaking to the Senshi and subtle hint of a connection between her and Mamoru's power (which I did want to include in the original version, but forgot to). And I did make sure to maintain the enigmatic nature of Sailor Cosmos. ;)

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The one constructive criticism I would offer is that I think some of the 'filler episode' plots in the beginning could use some fresh ideas. Obviously, you're still working on this - but I think the anime was victim of reusing the same concepts over and over. For example, I think the Usagi is jealous of Mamoru angle has has gotten so much mileage already, that it's not worth exploring again. The Ex-girlfriend (is she Hina?) plot sounds very similar to one of the filler episodes in SuperS.
I completely get this. I will admit to having done this on purpose, but only because I don't feel that any of the previous attempts at this plot in the anime were ever handled that well. For the episode where Mamoru's ex comes into play, I wanted to use this as an opportunity for Mamoru to finally confront Usagi about her insecurities, and it results in Usagi's hesitation to save Mamoru's ex, and also drives a wedge between the two of them afterward, which ultimately has to be resolved by, of all people, Seiya, who mends their relationship while still harboring feelings for Usagi.

As for his ex, no, she's not Hina.

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I also personally think that with the Anime introducing a thousand side characters, while introducing manga only characters is a neat concept, I would personally prefer to see the dynamics of the Senshi's relationships explored more. However, it's your fanfic and I know part of the reason why you're introducing these characters is to use as victims of the day.
Yeah, I needed some Victims of the Day for the early eps, but rather than keep introducing a bunch of nobodies like the anime did, I wanted to stick with characters who have already been introduced in preexisting fiction and try to flesh them out more. As for picking some manga-only characters, I think Hikaru's the only one I picked since Asanuma did have a cameo back in a Sailor Stars episode, so that he exists in the anime is something I felt should have been explored more.

Anyway, after the Victim of the Day episodes run dry, the series focuses more of the Senshi themselves and less on the side characters until the moments where the story called for it. :)

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With that said, I think your last arc sounds very strong as a concept. I think using two parters is a great idea because it's a good way to keep the story fresh. I just rewatched PGSM and it did a similar thing which was what kept the viewers interested.
To be honest, I was having trouble keeping the last arc confined to just 13 episodes. The "Amnesiac Usagi" plot was originally supposed to have way earlier in the story and be unrelated to the finale plot, but it worked out in the end. And the Shadow Senshi arc made things difficult with me having to both juggle two villain factions working off their own separate agendas simultaneous to one another, as well as giving enough focus to the Shadow Senshi as characters to keep them from being seen as just glorified Monsters of the Day (which, in a sense, they are, but I didn't want that to be so obvious). ^_^'

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I am very intrigued by your Season 7 though. I had the idea of a sequel to the anime or manga where the Sailor Guardians faced off against the 'Dark Government' but ultimately dropped in favor of writing a second season of PGSM set nine years after the Special Act and adapting the Infinity arc. I love the idea of the Saurians because it's very Super Sentai.
You can thank one of the other users on this board for first coming up with the idea of the Senshi fighting a Kaiju. It all stemmed from there.

As for the government stuff, I figured that any pre-Crystal Tokyo series would be obligated to have some politics involved since Usagi is essentially trying to "take over the world", which the rest of the world is likely to not be okay with at first since that concept is usually seen as something done by bad guys. So I figured that in order for this to work, Usagi would need some help from those with political connections, which led to the creation of the faction that wants to help her become Queen.

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For the Sailor Stars movie, I had a similar idea, but it was supposed to focus on human Artemis and his (and Luna's) home planet Mau - kind of like how the S movie focused on human Luna. Since you're drawing on PGSM ideas, perhaps reintroduce Mio Kuroki? P-:
Nah, I'm gonna be honest. I don't like Mio. At all. And since Beryl had had so much of a presence in the first season and was so prominent in the history of Serenity and Endymion, I couldn't think of anyone more appropriate than Queen Beryl proper to try and interfere with their wedding.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2015 2:22 pm 
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Beryl revived and interfereing with Usagi and Mamoru's life? At the very least, it's a step up from what happens to her in Dark Side of the Moon: Crystal ReMIX. (Tried to go after Mamoru again, with some help from Maleficent, who promised to help her, "if you bring me that wretched Sailor Moon's heart." However, Xigbar decided to mess everything up for Maleficent by getting her to help him instead.)


"Okay, I'll lay it down for you... Sailor Moon, big threat, you're not gonna win. At least, not without us. Lucky for you, we've already got you set up. You can deal with, say... Half of Sailor Moon, right? That crystal's nowhere near as powerful now that her heart's been split in two." Beryl looked towards the eyepatched man. "Now, I'm gonna let you in on a few juicy secrets..."


However, when she finally confronted Sailor Moon, she said just the wrong things relating to said juicy secrets that would've given the heroes part of the bigger picture. Had she not been sniped by Xigbar. Though she survived... She didn't survive the second shot. Oh, and get this...


This is basically what Xigbar does after sniping her.

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"Man, you'd think the Queen of the Dark Kingdom would be able to keep a secret..."

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I have always wanted to write Sailor Moon fan fiction.


Then do it...?


OK, most of my fan fiction will have some sort of cross over with another series/program.

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 Post subject: Re: Fanfiction Ideas
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FifthDoctorVenus wrote:
Kerochan no Miko wrote:
FifthDoctorVenus wrote:
I have always wanted to write Sailor Moon fan fiction.


Then do it...?


OK, most of my fan fiction will have some sort of cross over with another series/program.



Doctor who I guess ? :lol:

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 Post subject: Re: Fanfiction Ideas
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Doctor who I guess ? :lol:


Yes, of course, there will be plenty of Sailor Moon/Doctor Who crossover fan fictions.

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 Post subject: Re: Fanfiction Ideas
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Well, I managed to put a timeline of sorts together...


Birth By Sleep
Events of Birth By Sleep occur. Ventus defeats Vanitas, rendering him comatose, and what's left of his heart goes to Sora.
(Crystal ReMIX) Vanitas, on the verge of fading, follows Ventus to Sora, but is far too weak to do anything there.

Between BBS and KH1
- The amnesiac Terra-Xehanort begins his studies on the heart under Ansem the Wise before betraying him. The first Emblem Heartless are created.
- The first 8 members of Organization XIII become Nobodies.
- Multiple worlds consumed by darkness, including the world of Neon Genesis Evangelion.

Sailor Moon Classic/KH1/first bit of 358 Days
- Queen Beryl defeated
- Roxas and Namine created.
- (Crystal ReMIX) Vanitas revived at the same time, due to the power of the Keyblade of People's Hearts, and wakes up in Hollow Bastion. The time-traveling Young Xehanort meets up with Vanitas.
- Ansem, Seeker of Darkness defeated, and all the worlds destroyed by the Heartless, with The exception of the Sleeping Worlds in Dream Drop, are restored.

Sailor Moon R/Part of 358 Days/CoM



- Riku Replica is created, and dies. (Or... Is he dead? Maybe... Was that him in Dream Drop?)
-(Crystal ReMIX) Xigbar meets up with Vanitas before taking Roxas to his first mission in Agrabah.


Rest of Days, Sailor Moon S



KHII/Super S/Re:Coded
-(Crystal ReMIX) once again, Xigbar meets up with Vanitas. Vanitas starts formulating his plans with Young Xehanort, Saïx, and Xigbar.


Stars/Dream Drop Distance

- Vanitas appears before Sora in the Sleeping Worlds.
- Sora fails his Mark of Mastery.

Post Stars/Dream Drop

-Maleficent uses her dark powers to revive Queen Beryl like she did with Oogie Boogie in KHII. Maleficent manages to reignite her forgotten hatred. Her original plans for Beryl are unknown. It's safe to assume that she planned on having her turned into Heartless, though, before Xigbar picked her up.

-Beryl and Saïx meet up, Saïx attempting to get Beryl to ally with them. At first, being Beryl, refusing to "be their underling", she has her remaining Youma attack Saîx.

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Yeah, they didn't stand a chance.

Saïx gives Beryl another chance to accept an alliance. In the process, promising she will "have what she desires, and more." She agrees, perhaps reluctantly.

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 Post subject: Re: Fanfiction Ideas
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Kerochan no Miko wrote:
FifthDoctorVenus wrote:
I have always wanted to write Sailor Moon fan fiction.


Then do it...?


As you asked! Here is my fan fiction! I hope you like it!

The Fire Inside Us (Let the LOVE We Give To the World Burn)
[Sailor Moon x Doctor Who crossover fan fiction]

Characters:
Usagi/Sailor Moon
Ami/Sailor Mercury
Rei/Sailor Mars
Makoto/Sailor Jupiter
Minako/Sailor Venus
Haruka/Sailor Uranus
Michiru/Sailor Neptune
Setsuna/Sailor Pluto
Hotaru/Sailor Saturn
The Fifth Doctor

[Ch. 1]

Hi! My name is Usagi Tsukino, a 16 year old high school student. I love to eat, sleep, and play video games. I am also bit of a crybaby as well as a klutz. But you may know me as the Pretty Soldier who fights for love and justice, Sailor Moon!

I still cannot believe I'm in high school! It feels SOO different from junior high. I said as I walked down the stairs to eat breakfast with my family. I know it seems unusual, but I usually oversleep. Ever since I started high school, my friends and I made the sure that got up early so I would not miss class. Today was our day off.

I said goodbye to my parents as soon as I walked out the door. Meeting up with Ami, Rei, Mako, and Mina was always a good thing. Naru, Yumiko, and Kuri occasionally joined us for a snack. But today, they had not gone to our regular hang out spot. I was ALL alone!! Weird!! Where were they?! All of sudden, a blue box resembling a 1960's telephone booth appeared out of nowhere. Then out came a stranger, he looked to be his twenties. 'What is HE wearing?', I thought. He came up to me with his hand over his sweater. He'd been covered in blood. Lots of it. But what CAN I do? Euugh! I'm not good with stuff like this.

'Help me, please!', he exclaimed.

'Help you with what?', I asked.

'I need you to help with my wounds', he responded.

'Who ARE you?', I asked.

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 Post subject: Re: Fanfiction Ideas
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FifthDoctorVenus wrote:
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Doctor who I guess ? :lol:


Yes, of course, there will be plenty of Sailor Moon/Doctor Who crossover fan fictions.


I'm actually doing one myself. I'm a decent way into it too, though it's got a long way to go. Kind of had to slow down since I'm so busy with school right now. You can find it here, if you're interested: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4053494/Darth-Brando

Basically it's "Hey, let's throw everything the Whoniverse has at them and see what happens". It's been a blast, not to mention good practice and learning to get used to writing stuff people (can) read.

What surprises me the most is how well the canon fits together; not always, but enough that it actually works quite well. Probably helps that Doctor Who was off the air in the late 80's to the early 2000's (though they did have the audio adventures and a series of novels) so that whole bit of time in Earth history isn't covered much in the Whoniverse. There does have to be a bit of tweaking, but a lot of the major stuff can generally be left unchanged. Even better, classic Who has the Dark Guardian who is, fundamentally, chaos. So that's going to be fun to pull in later.

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 Post subject: Re: Fanfiction Ideas
PostPosted: Mon Dec 28, 2015 7:44 pm 
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I have a few, some of which you could encounter in my own stories. Warning: insanity and many cross overs ahead.

    A crossover with Cutey Honey (my take would be with the original manga)
    Sailor Mars leading the Biker Mice
    Mamoru gets raised by Balrog (Boxer) and Cammy from Street Fighter (I did warn you about the coming insanity, didn't I?)
    Minako vs Ranma Saotome
    Exploring Minako's missing period in the manga: whatever she did between her return from Beijing and Zoisite's death at her hands
    Finding out what happened to Hikaru Sorano and Gurizaku Amano
    Exploring the Sailor Soldiers' families (because we know almost nothing about most of them)
    Haruka and Michiru's mysterious past (we only know how they met in the anime)
    Exploring the plot holes, such as how Makoto can live alone or how Haruka can drive in Japan (no matter if you have an American licence, driving a car at 16 is still illegal under Japanese law)
    Minako's (mis)adventures as a part-time cop
    Usagi's cousin is Yusuke Urameshi
    Jadeite's real identity in the present is Takashi Mitsuhashi (start running)

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Hey, crossovers are MY thing! AUs are fine though.


Heck, Bishonen Senshi Rei, unlike canon Rei, is very sweet and kind-hearted. One of the few things he shares with his female counterpart, in fact, is his looks. (Seriously, this is a picture of him as a child. His very feminine looks are a genetic trait of males in the Hino family)


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He wasn't even around during the Silver Millennium, that was his ancestor, Aries, who appears to Rei and the others as a spirit to rally and support the living Senshi and his descendant. Once the other Senshi's memories of the past were restored? He... Starts showing that a thousand years in isolation have CLEARLY taken a toll on his sanity. Now that he remembers what the Dark Kingdom did, he's out for their blood. And he will do anything to make sure its spilt. Even Princess Endymion and Sailor Mercury, both under Beryl's control, are just two more people to be killed, and it took a LOT of convincing for him to even consider the group getting Mercury back as an option.

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 Post subject: Re: Fanfiction Ideas
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Princess Venus wrote:
Hey, crossovers are MY thing! AUs are fine though.

That may pose a problem, for I am effectively specialized in crossovers.

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Hey, crossovers are MY thing! AUs are fine though.

That may pose a problem, for I am effectively specialized in crossovers.



Refer to previous posts where Xigbar shoots Queen Beryl in the face. Twice. And from the very beginning she was nothing more than was convenient tool to be didposed of when she stopped being useful.

Should I make her even more pathetic and have her survive the second shot only for Saïx to finish her off?

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I've had an idea for this story for a long time. I don't consider myself a writer, but I figured I'd give it a whirl. I never thought it would go far but, after taking free time over the last few weeks and just writing, I have managed to write 45 pages and three chapters. Still have no idea how I did it. My idea?
I admit, the sound isn't original. Sailor Venus becomes the leader. However, that is where most of those stories end, this is where mine begins.
What if, for years Minako suspected there were more to her powers? What if there was a small rift that started to form between her and certain outer senshi? What if she found out... she was right? Perhaps, Minako finds love along the way?

Thoughts or comments?

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