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 Post subject: Usagi Fan Art Critique Wanted
PostPosted: Wed Jun 08, 2016 5:41 am 
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Hello! So I'd like to share my Usagi fan art here...I'm nervous as I don't share my art like at all but I want critique! I don't mind if you're harsh, as I notice most people refrain from being honest as to not hurt me. I'm barely exploring digital art, so my lining is very thick and clunky and my anatomy is just...blegh. Any pointers would be awesome!


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 Post subject: Re: Usagi Fan Art Critique Wanted
PostPosted: Wed Jun 08, 2016 4:32 pm 
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It feels as if she had no legs & were floating in the air, like this gigantic legless robot: lol


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 Post subject: Re: Usagi Fan Art Critique Wanted
PostPosted: Wed Jun 08, 2016 11:14 pm 
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Well, that background is nice. The rest needs some improvement. P-:

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 Post subject: Re: Usagi Fan Art Critique Wanted
PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2016 3:51 pm 
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The colors used in the pic look harmonious as a whole, tho. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Usagi Fan Art Critique Wanted
PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2016 5:28 am 
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Thanks for critique! I have an improved one here, I am much happier with it!


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 Post subject: Re: Usagi Fan Art Critique Wanted
PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2016 4:46 pm 
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^ Looks better. :)

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 26, 2016 1:57 am 
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Thanks for critique! I have an improved one here, I am much happier with it!

Actually, it became worse, since you completely changed the background, which was the most polished thing in your artwork. P-:

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