Tokyoma Gaiden Episode Descriptions and potential extrapolations

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I'll make sure to comment when I finish reading ^_^
 
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And I've finally finished with Pinako's bookends for the Dub's first arc

Episode Treatments - Full First Arc.pdf

This is probably going to become a project in and of itself... one that once again I may not finish.

If you have any thoughts on it, please drop a few opinions by, especially since the episodes were chosen to make it as "Manga Accurate" as possible.
  • Central: "of course, and I nearly got a Sailor Scout destroyed before she had even awoken." - Luna? :luna:
  • Pinako's adorable
  • So, they got energy drinks for beings of the Negaverse to consume
  • While all the commercial breaks and flashbacks confuse me a bit, it seems quite organized and specific.
  • "Yes, it was very tragic what happened to him in the end. For all of the evil things he did beforehand, rescuing Molly was the ultimate redemption for him. However, one’s spirit can’t truly die. When he was revived a few years later he kept on watching over Molly and Melvin from a far distance*, he’s invited her to Riverdale on a few occasions**."
  • Diamond Kingdom
  • “Urrrrrrrrp / murrrrrrrr” - Are those supposed to be monster noises?
  • Metty: I’ll tell you three when the time is right,... - OMFG not you too :dead:
  • Ok, so Metty seems to have dreams that regard Queen Beryl
  • Metty can turn into clouds?
  • Alright so Central was from the Negaverse...
  • I wonder how this whole conversation will go down in the non Dic version
  • So Central [Spectrix]. was Thea’s mother. I almost thought it was Luna. :luna:
  • I see the 4th wall break. So Racy [I’m assuming Leshy] is a whole scout in herself.
  • I like the loving family bond the characters have
 
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  • Central: "of course, and I nearly got a Sailor Scout destroyed before she had even awoken." - Luna? :luna:
Luna gets her info from Artemis, and where did he get his info?


  • Pinako's adorable
  • So, they got energy drinks for beings of the Negaverse to consume
Better to get energy drinks for those cravings... especially since Pinako herself does not have them.


  • While all the commercial breaks and flashbacks confuse me a bit, it seems quite organized and specific.
Yeah, the early parts have them in because I wasn't sure where I was going to have them lead to or from. but for the later episodes, I marked specific moments.

  • "Yes, it was very tragic what happened to him in the end. For all of the evil things he did beforehand, rescuing Molly was the ultimate redemption for him. However, one’s spirit can’t truly die. When he was revived a few years later he kept on watching over Molly and Melvin from a far distance*, he’s invited her to Riverdale on a few occasions**."
Check those asterisks, there may be references.

which went unnamed if I checked correctly.

  • “Urrrrrrrrp / murrrrrrrr” - Are those supposed to be monster noises?
Nope, that's Little Metty (Metalia or in this case, Negaforce) waking up from a dream.


  • Metty: I’ll tell you three when the time is right,... - OMFG not you too :dead:
  • Ok, so Metty seems to have dreams that regard Queen Beryl
Metty's dreams are SO vivid, it's like she was actually there somehow!


  • Metty can turn into clouds?
Influenced.... by the SUN!

  • Alright so Central was from the Negaverse...
  • So Central [Spectrix]. was Thea’s mother. I almost thought it was Luna. :luna:
:vanish: Look deeply into the quotes.

  • I wonder how this whole conversation will go down in the non Dic version
Thing is... it won't, mainly because it was written with the DiC (and Cloverway when I get to it) version in mind. It's like when The Transformers got Fourth and Fifth seasons. for Headmasters, we got 3 episodes, Japan got a full series, and the stories were unrelated to each other.
and for a Fifth season equivalent, Japan got Pretenders and Godmasters, and we got a good amount of episodes rerun with new segments put in the beginning and end of the episodes being told about.

Why am I talking about this? .... It's because those segments inspired those Tokyo Side Stories bookends.

  • I see the 4th wall break. So Racy [I’m assuming Leshy] is a whole scout in herself.
  • I like the loving family bond the characters have.
To make it "Comic Book Accurate" the bookends will be omitting the Doom Tree, though since one of its episodes have Sailor Moon's next Power up, the episode "Cherry Blossom Time" will have to be edited into a Negamoon episode. This also means turning Racy into a Droid. I'm glad you saw the 4th wall breaking at the thought of it :lol:

Let me know what you think of these replies! :D

And let me know what you think of how many episodes will have to be merged in the next arc!
 
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Speaking of merged episodes: Here's a preview of future bookends!

NEGAMOON ARC
13. – EP 045 “Cherry Blossom Time” (will be edited to have the Negamoon send her out.)
14. – EP 054 “Serena Times Two”
15. – EP 061 “Naughty ‘N’ Nice”
16. – EP 063 & 064 “Catsy & Bertie” (Merger of "Enemies No More" & "Checkmate")
17. – EP 064 & 065 “Avery & Prizma” (Merger of "Checkmate" & "Sibling Rivalry")
18. – EP 066 & 067 “Rubeus’ Last Stand” (Merger of "Rubeus Evens the Score" & "Rubeus Strikes Out")
19. – EP 075 “Future Shocked”
20. – EP 076 & 077 “The Complicated Hidden Agenda” (Merger of "Legend of the Negamoon" & "Jealousy's Just Reward")
21. – EP 078 “Birth of Wicked Lady”
22. – EP 079 & 080 “Wiseman’s Betrayal” (Merger of "Brotherly Love" & "Diamond in the Rough")
23. – EP 080 & 081 “Showdown with the Doom Phantom” (Merger of "Diamond in the Rough" & "Final Battle")
 
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Time for some more episodes to be told to DiC Pinako!
Tokyo Side Stories - Pinako Bookends - Negamoon Arc (Not finished Yet).pdf
And needs more thoughts, this script is unfinished, although each planned episode is given its own starting page, not even half of them are filled in yet. Plus, I suspect that this is going to be quite the Merge-a-palooza near the end, you can even see the beginnings of a planned outline for which S episodes to use.

Any thoughts on what's down there do far?
 
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I've cleared out my google drive last month, and will have to rebuild this list of scripts, but I do have at least a plan for Pinako's Bookends for Sailor Moon S Episodes.
I'll be delivering the plan in an image, the PDF file will come later on, and the other PDFs will be updated here on my computer before being reuploaded and links updated, in the meantime, the links are all 404s at the moment.